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Cheers for the comment Tri. Much appreciated; I should have perhaps mentioned that its the third part I most want crits for. The other two are tried and tested--if now ...

This is true, but at the same time it could be good in that it will be an eye opener: you can look at it and literally see how far ...

They say that those whose lives have been so agonizingly taken from us at such a young age tend to linger [s]just a bit longer to enjoy life’s simpler pleasures[/s] ...

Hey, thanks for those. *edits* Tricksy little things arent they. Did you guys notice the links? The mention of the map the Collector used to find Ivan. And the connection ...

I'm sure many of you are aware of these stories already. But they are no longer seperate. For my final, three thousand word piece of my writing course. They are ...

1. Phyllis Brook bumbled about within a nest of charts and diagrams. He was never still, filled with a frenetic energy that propelled him all about his small shop. Maps, ...

Grading System: Fail Pass (P) Credit (C) Distinction (D) High Distinction (HD) I got a C for this, and that, incase your wondering, is fantastic. Its extroadinarily hard to get ...

Hahaha, noice Loony, very noice. Especially love the use of 'shank', so very apt. Thank you both for your comments.

A small bundle of sleeping white beauty, so soft and warm and lovely. A picture of innocence in a basket, in the laundry. I loved you instantly; the little sweating ...

Lol, the ending was meant to be a surprise, but I never said that all the maps were people. Unique people who could see through the illusion were then killed ...

Pat Buchanan! ... Obviously. Pssh.

Err, I don't even know if I should crit this in the proper sense... isn't this non-fiction in part? It is very well written, I can say, there are a ...

Yes thats been the consensus really; pragmatism over my artistic reservation lol. Just get out there for now; I'm glad you agree that Monster was better XD, that means something. ...

Those things you questioned aren't mine, Tri, those are the parts the editor added in and for the most part I... dislike, really. And again, as I said initially, I ...

So I submitted 'Monster' to an anthology of short stories 'Flash Spec' that will be published later this year and was asking for submissions. It was short listed for publication ...