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That's one option, yes, but I don't want to take it. A short story, whatever the length, is generally meant to be read and viewed in one sitting. If it ...

Download preferably - I can't post it in its original format, which is as it should be seen. It's only a short film script - 16 pages or so.

Well now, I agree and disagree with some of the things said here. One, as Grif said, it's over-written - there is brilliance in simplicity, pare it down a bit. ...

His breath was ragged. Nervous. Laced with terror and fear and hopelessness. Hopelessness. * The feel of its potency against his chest. Its slender neck, cool and harsh and rigid ...

Lol, confused. The webcam was trying to defy me. That expression was leading upto my 'one more time mofo and it's on' look. Be glad you were spared. 'Tis truly ...

Three seconds ago.....

There are quite a few more bisexual/pansexual/whatever people here than I would have imagined. I don't know why I'm surprised by that, but I am. I wonder if being a ...

he was so full of frustration hat his fingers threatened to pry the bars apart, if only for something to do. that With the force, he had displayed earlier, Marshall ...

swop swap I'll see that you all loose your jobs lose The stable scene did not feel rushed, not in terms of content, but in terms of what it reveals? ...

Ah, someone sees! I don't know about kicking them, but I certainly was disappointed a great deal. Everyone's entitled to their opinion and I'm so very, very glad about yours. ...

Oy, just a quick word before I have to run. The comments regarding lack of description are fine; there was never meant to be any. This, for me, was an ...

For those interested, I did a complete rewrite of this and posted it in Other Fiction. It is entitled, 'Hungry Generations'. I realised, during the rewrite, that I had lost ...

Ah, the beloved Imp has been released to us once more. Be thankful, no? I quite enjoyed this. It's vintage Imp. Your style is rather eclectic, your word choice haphazard ...

A little bell tinkled. Sitting in the kitchen, a weary Bella sighed as she heard the slight, familiar noise reverberate. She got up, putting aside the paper she had been ...

I think this was a very interesting and well written piece. It's quite the clever idea, actually. Sometimes such ideas don't translate well, but I think this one did, so ...