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Ahaha, take a bow Panda Dave, that was nicely done. Feels good to have the little things pointed out to me - *pokes lazy YWSers* I think you're both right ...

"For Lords sake woman, where's my food?" That just sounds odd. Substitute 'Lords' with 'Gods' where he and Charlotte's younger brother David were sat, waiting. Charlotte's mother laid the food ...

*pokes*

Morning slowly crept over the dark City but the light remained dim and the sky grey. It was ever so within the bounds of the massive walls that enclosed them. ...

Sweet - glad you liked it. The second chapter is proving to be quite the persistant bugger, in that it refuses to end and die. I should post it later ...

Yeah, in Australia it's spelled with an 's'. I'm working on Chapter Two at the moment, twil be interesting to see where this goes. Thanks again.

Ah, nicely spotted. *Changed. Cheers and thanks, all, for the responses.

Okay, well, since there's been so much confusion perhaps it's the writing that needs to be fixed after all. I don't want it to be too much more then the ...

Haha,awesome. Thanks for bothering to read it - tis appreciated. It's definetly an interesting story so I know what you mean by wanting to read or see, more of it. ...

Ha, sweet. I'm glad you guys liked it. Cheers for the comments. Thanks, all.

Ah, thanks for the comments. This is the first chapter of an old story that I'm rewriting. I'm adding the rest of the chapter now.

The boy stared at it. It stared back. The silence lingered, stretched taut. Neither of them said anything; the boy was too terrified to think. The creature was seven feet ...

It wasn't meant to be creepy per se, but it was dark. It is basically about a boy, without many friends, who is dared to go down to the graveyard. ...

Oh dear. I apologise - I just realised that I added the wrong attachment hahaha, I'm really sorry. The completed, short film (not radio as the previous version was) is ...

You can see them dancing, sometimes. If you know where to look and when, you’ll see them floating carefree, all white and cool and lovely. I was lucky enough to ...