Jiggity

I know right. I'm a master of subtlety.

Mikhail was apprehensive. Being around Sunestraka, no matter how placid he acted, was more then enough. He was almost faint with fear at the thought that soon, he’d be surrounded ...

*pokes*

Hey Gyr. Just got a few questions regarding the opening bit of this chapter. Why is the Headmaster of this all important Academe talking to her about something like classification? ...

LOL. Hey, Gyr. Quote: sitting abreast the flames This may be another Aussie/Yank thing, but over here “abreast” means “next to” not “on top of.” The word you may be ...

Hiya, Gyr! I read this when you posted it, but I didn't really have much to say. I realised then that I had read this chapter before as well, so ...

Okay.... *waits* I've briefly stopped writing this - chapter 3 is up and posted of course - but beyond that I haven't done anything. I'm now writing a short story ...

Hello and welcome, Professor Rabbit, to YWS. This first piece of yours is fairly well written, so kudos on that. Unfortunately, it doesn't really do much at all with the ...

Finding the Path Walking along a stretch of green in the dark. Periodic lights blink and flicker red and yellow, giving the illusion of light. Pools of shadow hint at ...

This is romantic fiction? Haha. I thought it was good, a little superficial at the moment. I mean, is this a short stand alone piece? Or will this continue? Knowing ...

Whoa, yeah, so it would seem. Thank you all for the taking the time to comment and for the helpful comments - when I come back to edit all this, ...

Tannar watched as Karenna watch them go, and felt a small, a very small, stab of guilt that he might have ruined her chances with the handsome youth. Even should ...

Hey, thanks for the comment. As for Mikhail and killing the Magister -- of course he didn't actually do it, but he's just a kid so he feels responsible. If ...

Whoa! I mean, whoa. For the most part, very helpful suggestions! Thanks a bunch Gyr *hugs*. I am not, I should say straight off, going to make wholesale changes immediately. ...

I read, I liked and I haven't much more to say unfortunately. Not much really happened. I will say I thought it a tad abrupt leaving off where you did ...