Jiggity

Very few errors, only a couple of typo's, so good stuff. Nice descriptions; it flows well, the sentences are simple and the content is fairly interesting so all in all, ...

I don't know what it is, Gyr - maybe its that I'm tired, or just lazily minded at the moment, holidaying it up as I am, but I didn't find ...

Some Nitpicks: his warmth was more appealing than [s]what she usually got.[/s] That's a bit awkwardly worded. I'd suggest replacing the striked out words with 'expected'. Where do you want ...

It was a good film made great by the performance of Ledger, whose manic energy and twistedly brilliant performance just lifted this film to heights it could never otherwise enjoy. ...

Lol, I don't think George Mason is on the list of universities I can go to - although there was one in Washington available. Okay so I submitted my application ...

Tuition fees don't factor into exchanges - I pay the same as I do at my original university, no matter where I decide to go. The costs that I look ...

Cool. I hate to appear indecisive. but I just took a look at oppurtunities available in the UK. Initially, thought there was no way I could do that, given the ...

Something is awfully, awfully wrong with this world. 'Nuff said.

XD. Yay! Yeah, chewy, I know...hence my wanting to come. I don't want to go too extreme with the loans though, so preferabbly, most affordable options must be taken. Which ...

Also, I was just wondering - how many of you are going to Sac State? And do any of you live on Campus? Would it be cheaper to do that ...

Hey peeps!! So, obviously, I didn't make it last year. I have just been informed that I have very little time to organise everything to make it over in the ...

Yes, I thought it about time to reveal what had happened to him. Really, this chapter was only to disengage from the last - which left off on a cliffhanger ...

Angel! Yay! I tells ya, this is good stuff. You're inspiring me, you know - I should be frantically finishing a half-done short story, but I shall delay it a ...

Thats the kind of comments/positiveness I need! *bottles you up, puts in backpack, takes everywhere* I am trying to make it realistic, to question and to keep the ideas fresh ...

*throws more chapters at you* XD. Heya! I know, I love writing my short stories... but I wanted to prove to myself that I could write a novel length story, ...