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Cal opened his eyes. He blinked a few times, slowly, trying to figure out what had woken him. The fire had died down to little more then embers that spat ...

Cal stood in the aftermath, fists clenched. He was smiling. The remaining men raised a heartfelt cheer at that. One which quickly died down as a terrifying shriek was heard. ...

Magda was making her way back, the once empty bucket now filled to the brim. Her fingers were red as the content of the bucket sloshed back and forth. She ...

XD I don't do too much reviewing; it has to be good enough to hold my attention first off. Doesn't happen all too often. Has Nate said why he's taken ...

Ahaha, no I did not actually. And it didn't really come across that way, I didn't think of him as "special" - only young, so that needs some work, methinks. ...

Actually, I have to disagree with Patty. It's not attention span, it's bad writing. You have an okay premise with some promise; there's some signs that you can do good ...

Hey BBB, 'sup. I think you've got quite the interesting premise here, not an uncommon one, but with a somewhat different bent on the idea. Edward Phillips, you are a ...

Together, they crashed through the underbrush, loud as clumsy boars. Eventually, the tinkling music of running water reached their ears and they came to the banks of a stream. Cal ...

This story now has a timeline, I'm afraid - by which I mean I'll keep it here for another week, week and a half tops, before removing it. Hopefully, by ...

Sacrifice a goat to the gods - always does the trick.

You mean the description of the mountain was not enough?! No way! XD. It's a fairly generic mountain really, shouldn't be hard to envision and I don't want to waste ...

XD. Thanks for saying so :wink: Working on finishing it, just a long short story I thought I'd cook up. Glad you liked it. Cheers.

She sat outside, watching the sunset. The last rays warmed her skin as she enjoyed the mesmerising sight. She had enjoyed many a sunset in her time, but none could ...

Well, my first original attempt at a story was called A Short Story Entitled 'A Beggar's Tale' and it was about Merlin, the greatest wizard in folkore and mythology, now ...

Ah, so it is a short story after all. The reason I think that as a short story, it needs serious revision, is because the stakes are not high enough. ...