Jianfre

Personally, you are either done or about done if you are finished with editing. Do not add filler to your story, if people wanted filler they would watch the news ...

Jasminebells, your stories should not be cheap Goosebumps novels. Yes, I am looking at you R.L. Stein. Do not have action for the sake of action. Do not have cliffhangers ...

Mary Sues exist in real life, but they shouldn't be main characters in your story. Twilight is more then just full of Sues... its full of preachy religious morals and ...

It is fewer then say 80, but when you have more characters in Harry Potter (decent example right?) that come and go with their scenes I do think it is ...

SF is more open and thus more free then fantasy in many ways. Because at a certain point fantasy becomes SF and then you get not Science Fiction, but Science ...

Christianity + Big Bang Theory = Okay. Though you are being far to simplistic for the utter grandeur which exists. You could make an entire story instead of a comical ...

You have a lot of bad word choices words in here, 'learnt' and 'quieten' are also bad. My browser even recognizes the former as such. The prologue piece is not ...

"Far out, a talking tree! Is this an enchanted mystical farm, or something?" So forced. Completely unnatural unless the kid is a 1960's hippie. Usually a more stunned reaction exists, ...

Yes, Rosey, that is exactly what I did with one of the surviving characters. He becomes a General and reflects on great heroes of the battles. Few of the characters ...

Things are already complicated Writersdomain. Since the story follows soldiers on both sides going into war I have them split into 3 and 4 plot lines a piece, with each ...

You are not paying for each letter, but you may be paid for each. :D I would use proper speech and simply format it correctly unless you are doing a ...

So as of right now I have 7, yes that's right, 7 plot lines going on at the same time in my story. The characters are all interconnected and physically ...

I am quickly beginning to think fantasy has hit a point because of the lack of development. Hopefully it will not go the way of the Western, but that is ...

]A piece of paper, full of endless possibilities, and for her endless frustration. She glared down at its vast emptiness, as if it were the source of all her problems. ...

It flows well, and does wrap up quite nicely. I do not know why you did not separate the stanzas. This would give a longer pause to further pronounce the ...