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  • Media Reviews Re: The Thief Lord by Cornelia Funke

    I enjoyed this book, but I liked Dragon Rider even better (I only saw the movie for Inkheart- is the book better?) So much better! I think the movie dumbs ...

    Jan 28, 2011
  • Writing Activities Re: Title Feedback

    It makes me think irrevocably of Lord of the Rings fanfic, but I'd assume it's fantasy and about some magical rings. Unfortunately, that's mainly because that's what LOTR is about. ...

    Aug 16, 2010
  • Writing Activities Re: Rate the first sentence above you

    8/10 Don't like the onomatopoeic start, but the rest would lead me into a story. The sun was a beacon behind Mr Copslow’s head, crowning him in sweaty, sticky glory, ...

    Aug 16, 2010
  • Art & Photography Re: Book Love

    I'm not great with photography, but I find that there isn't much to focus on here. There's a stray piece of thread (?) in the bottom left corner which is ...

    Jul 17, 2010
  • Fiction Discussion Re: When writing, what is your most difficult challenge?

    I only write short stories, but that's because I can't write a decent plot-driven piece to save my life at the moment and I'm so guilty of purple prose sometimes. ...

    Jul 13, 2010
  • Media Reviews Re: Catching Fire

    Did you say upcoming movie? Why oh why do I never hear about these things? xD

    Oct 25, 2009
  • Writing Activities Re: Rate The Idea Above You!

    7/10 The idea of a clan living in the woods sounds a bit odd. But I like the rest. I've only got a basic idea. It's still in the processing ...

    Oct 22, 2009
  • Art & Photography Re: Jelly and Fish in a field of Flowers (Photography)

    Hey there, this is Jet, here to review. Prettyful jellyfish! :P 1. I don't like this one so much. The focus isn't very good, and the picture seems blurred, but ...

    Oct 15, 2009
  • Fiction Discussion Re: Does this sound good?

    I think this is a bit too confusing. You mention winning in the last line; winning against what exactly? Believing, as fhwdf said, in what exactly? The "something unworldly" is ...

    Oct 13, 2009
  • Writing Activities Re: Rate the first sentence above you

    8/10 Nice imagery, but makes me think that the sadness is somehow making this person sweat, with the "droplets at the top of your brow". Seems odd... "I don't see ...

    Oct 11, 2009
  • Fiction Discussion Re: Motivation Problems

    listen to some relaxing music Or some new music. I find that helps; doing anything a little out of the ordinary can give you a bit of motivation to write. ...

    Oct 10, 2009
  • NovMo Archives Re: Who's ready for NaNoWriMo?

    I'm SixteenHundred there, by the way. Not Jetpack. It's an old account. So SixteenHundred's where to look if you want to add me. ^^ By the way, thanks a lot ...

    Oct 7, 2009
  • NovMo Archives Re: Who's ready for NaNoWriMo?

    Yeah, I'm at the beginning of the GCSE year, and I have 30% of my Drama GCSE in early December. Just a little worried. Any veterans got some advice? ;)

    Oct 6, 2009
  • NovMo Archives Re: Who's ready for NaNoWriMo?

    I'm not sure. I tried last year - or was it the year before that? - and messed it up, but then, novels really aren't my thing. One of my ...

    Oct 6, 2009
  • Media Reviews Re: Catching Fire

    I think that the author herself kinda forgot about the supposed baby as much as Peeta and Katniss did. I had to read that part in the book so many ...

    Oct 5, 2009


No spring nor summer beauty hath such grace as I have seen in one autumnal face.
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