Jetpack

I haven't read much of your work before, but even in a piece this short, I really like your writing style. It flows well and there were no awkward sentences ...

Congrats to the winners! Thanks for the mention, Ben. :)

Hi, A2DS. You've already said that you're not too keen on nitpicks, so I'll give you a general review. On the whole, this was a refreshing read, but I'll give ...

Has this storybook gone kaput? I'm very sorry if it has. Ditto. I've been on holiday the last couple of weeks and helping friends move house recently, and next week ...

Hey, Sean. I'll second seeminglymeaningless in that you should take the story out of quotes and hide your author's note, mainly because both are distracting to the reader. Of course ...

I'm back! The Review Shack is open for requests. Anyone?

If your going to add a point cost to create storybooks maybe you could take it a step further by making people have to pay to join them. I think ...

((Guys, I'm going on holiday for two weeks without regular access to a computer, and I'm torn between sending Enyalius off in a huff into the middle of nowhere or ...

Hi again, UCCM. Back for another review! This time, due to the length, I'm going to nitpick to the ends of the earth and back as per my usual reviews. ...

Enyalius Underneath his calm demeanour, Enyalius was panicking. He couldn't put any feeling he had for Ren into words when he wasn't entirely sure what he felt for her himself, ...

I just typed up a whole review and my browser failed. *hits computer* Welcome to YWS, U. This is one of the best "first posts" I've seen in a long ...

10/10 The sheer awesomeness of that avatar... "Tapiooooooca! Tapioooooca!" *Ryan dies laughing* Best Whose Line moment ever.

Welcome to YWS, MyStoryline. This is quite effectively written and as the above reviewer said, it's a very sad topic to read about. I won't pretend I know anything about ...

Hi, Chryssa, and welcome to YWS. I haven't much to say that Night Owl and Soda didn't cover, so I'll just repeat a bit. I suppose it's always worth getting ...

Hey there, Veiyloxx. Welcome to YWS! So this is where that username comes from, I suppose? I'll be reading through and nitpicking as I go, and then I'll give a ...