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Lily Before Lily could answer Sean, Alex Clarkson put out a call for all the Heads of Department to head to the conference room. Lily grinned with anticipation; she loved ...

Lily O'Briain, President of Marketing Lily had lost sight of the CEO amongst all of the people buzzing around the lobby. The new layout was definitely spectacular; Lily was hanging ...

I've read it through twice, and am still wholly confused as to what's going on here. Why did you choose to post this particular excerpt rather than start from the ...

Enyalius Enyalius could hear muffled voices conferring behind him as he turned and walked back towards the camp. He knew that Ren wouldn't be pleased with his impromptu decision, and ...

Here for a review. I'll split this into a couple of categories dealing with my main points. Purpose of the Prologue You rarely need a prologue, and I'd say that ...

Luv this room. I think that room would actually make me sad to wake up every morning. It's a little depressing, don't you think? Have to say I love the ...

Hey, HG, welcome to YWS! I see you haven't had any reviews yet, so I thought I'd give you your first. Is this going to be a short story or ...

Name: Lily O'Brian Age: 16 Picture/Description: Lily's always followed fashion, but she's very petite and struggles to find clothes that suit her small frame. She keeps her blonde hair in ...

Hey all! Yeah, I'll do President of Marketing when I get around to posting a profile later today. I can't wait to start googling pictures for this. :)

*saves spot for a girl in marketing* I'll be out of town from next Monday to Friday, but I'll get my profile up before that. I'm hoping for some Internet ...

I agree with the others who have mentioned the names; I find it very difficult to take "bender" and "hippie" seriously. I've also used the Fantasy Name Generator and think ...

I moved further north from the south of England when I was seven, but I still have all the pronunciations - BAH-th for bath, PAR-th for path, AHN-sur for answer, ...

((Happy to oblige. Enyalius the usher it is. :wink: I figured that Nightfall might not know the Prince on appearance if she's lived in the forest all her life. Feel ...

((I'm back, although not for very long. Did this die? Seems a waste of a good storybook. I'm posting again.)) Enyalius Enyalius paced by the edge of the forest, taking ...

Like the reviewer above, I enjoyed this. I won't nitpick fully, but only point out some recurring problems I had - then I'll move on to some more general positives ...