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Inception guy! And other inception guy! I can't remember their names... i think the second one is Arthur, and the first one is Yves or something. Tom Hardy was Eames ...

It makes me think irrevocably of Lord of the Rings fanfic, but I'd assume it's fantasy and about some magical rings. Unfortunately, that's mainly because that's what LOTR is about. ...

8/10 Don't like the onomatopoeic start, but the rest would lead me into a story. The sun was a beacon behind Mr Copslow’s head, crowning him in sweaty, sticky glory, ...

Hi, Vasticity. This will be the first time I've ever posted in the Scripts forum, but I've been following this and the fact that it's been popping up on the ...

Hey, Classy. I'm not quite sure how this is going to turn into a novel without this piece being rendered a prologue, because though I rather like this style in ...

I've commented on this mainly because I actually liked the change in POV from second person to first person in this piece. I definitely wouldn't do it all the time, ...

Okay, I'll answer your two questions first. I have no idea what category this would come under, which I suppose is why it probably belongs in Other. It feels finished ...

Hey, BondGirl, I'm here for a review. I don't know if you really want nitpicks, but I'll start with those anyways, before talking about the piece itself. I’m afraid to ...

Hey again! Round Two it is. I've literally just finished with Chapter 1 so I can keep it in mind for this review, but I'll try not to nitpick as ...

Hey. Jet here to give you a review. I'll talk you through some paragraphs with nitpicks, I think, because though there aren't all that many and you've edited it, there's ...

1. iPod speakers doubling as an alarm clock.

My entire review just died. I was only halfway through, but still. I'll cut the introductions and get straight to reviewing this time around, I think. I mostly have nitpicks. ...

This wasn't exactly what I was expecting when I was flicking through Romantic Novels, but actually, it's very refreshing, if a little surprising at first. I really liked the style ...

I did a quick bit of googling after Rachael's comment and read the same news story. Even in that factual style, the whole story was quite disturbing; the simplicity of ...

Enyalius "So if you aren't human, what are you?" The hybrid, Nightfall, was finally beginning to show some of the suspicion Enyalius had missed back in the forest. He smiled. ...