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Requests, anyone? I'll review anything except graphic 18+ stories (not concerned about language, though) and poetry/lyrics.

Hey, Auteur. You seem pretty keen to get reviews, so I think I'll give you one. I'll nitpick a bit, because it's obviously quite short. Like a broken clock my ...

Hey there! Glad to see you've started posting your work. It's a lot less terrifying the second time, believe me. I'm quite a picky reviewer, though - don't take it ...

Hi again! I know this has been up for a while, but I've not been reviewing much recently and so I've only just spotted it. I'll give you a general ...

Nope. I've had the same favourite colour since I was a toddler. TUBM is worried about tomorrow.

Yeah, I think so. Well, we'll do the next class and then we'll skip. How about I post a quick paragraph moving us on, after that? Just a narration type ...

7/10 I totally posted that earlier and nobody had seen it! I like that movie, but not especially much. 27 Dresses

Hehe, Tex, we'll keep the cannibals off him. :P Anyone have any ideas as to how to keep this moving forward? I don't want to be stuck living through lessons ...

This is my first review in a few days, so I'm a little off the pace here. Okay, I don't like the prologue. Once I got onto the main body ...

((Yeah, you got it right, Aqua. I'll try to wrap this up so we can get back to the classes.)) Cara/Death "I'll try to break it down for you." Cara ...

((Okay, so Electrum and Mistique know their identities, and so do Death and Flux. No more as yet, at least not until after the superheroes' meeting tonight, which will be... ...

Cara/Death When Cara opened her locker, she knew someone had been there. Her books had toppled over and papers were crumpled, loose from their folders. Whoever it was hadn't bothered ...

No problem. And yes, I adore Heroes, but that's another thread, I suppose.

((Sure, it's great! I won't post again until tomorrow, though. School's so irritating, and I had a hockey match today so I have to actually sleep, unless I want to ...

((Aqua, I don't know whether Java recognised Laina or Cara, so I'm trying to sort of anticipate both. And TexanWriter - can I shorten that at all? - here's your ...