Jetpack

7/10 Should I know who that is?

Everyone and his dog seem to have a fixation on superpowers, including myself, but I restrict myself from writing about it because it's become quite cliché. What you have here, ...

Apologies, I was too lazy to point them out. Okay, let me show you one, because I don't like leaving things unfinished. "None of your business, Fiyre." She muttered In ...

I agree with all that Lauren said, but figured I'd add my penny's worth as well. Mine just concerns the way your characters are transported to this other world. I, ...

Done. Mostly nitpicks, but still done.

Hi again. This is the second part of your review, as requested, but I'll have to warn you that quite a lot of this was totally over my head - ...

*shudders* I have horrible memories of playing the violin. I epic sucked, mainly because I never practiced. :P Welcome, though. I've seen you around the site a little bit, and ...

Cara/Death "I've got it covered," Death said through gritted teeth, and Mistique looked down. "None of you need to get involved. Especially not you, Flux. We run into anyone difficult, ...

Here as requested, but I notice this is book two? Clearly I haven't read book one, but I'll try my best with this. I didn't read the backstory, because I ...

Cara/Death Death usually loved patrol. It was the one time when she felt totally comfortable and life had a defined goal. Bad was bad and good was good in the ...

Heard about it over on TW - yep - last summer, just before I quit it. Then a friend brought YWS up and I figured I'd give it a go. ...

((I'm a bit lost. Basically, everyone's outside except Don and Helen? And we're waiting for someone to write demons in? Well, if the demon's inside, I guess I'm going to ...

((All together, down one street, but in different groups down that street. If that makes sense.))

((I think I'll just post it.)) The day has passed, and the night has arrived. Eleven teenagers leave their homes at midnight: nine to meet in an abandoned warehouse, and ...

((I'm going to post a little paragraph moving us all on to the night, but I'm not sure everyone's ready yet. Is everyone ready yet? I think we're going to ...