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Have you read Wolf Brother ? In that book, the perspective is split, so that some scenes are written from the POV of a wolf cub. The cub refers to ...

I'll PM you back later, Rider, when I have the chance... I'm at school. :/

Well, we're going for a little break from uncovering identities for a while, anyway. There's still a fight going on between the heroes and villains. But we've decided on a ...

8/10 I like it. :)

Jem. Easily depressed. Weather manipulation. For reasons unknown to her, Jem began to run. Her shoes pounded the corridors as she sprinted towards her locker, where she'd last seen that ...

Nooo! The puns are making a comeback! *dies* A football team... :lol:

Weekends are as normal, i.e. real life in the day, superhero at night. You think they like walking around in costume in broad daylight? xD

Done, Audy! Hope it's helpful. There wasn't much to comment on in terms of plot and character, so I nitpicked away. :P

Hey, Audy. I just saw your request, but I was going to review this anyways, so it all works out rather well. I haven't read the other reviews, so apologies ...

I'm thinking if we fight them for long enough, and then ridersofdamar's character turns up in time to fight as well, we might end up with a new team member. ...

Okay, I'll give you nitpicks, since if this is due tomorrow you probably aren't going to have time to rewrite major parts of it. Quick review, then. she relishes in ...

((I just want to let you all know that ridersofdamar is going to be joining as another hero. The character will join the team, but for now will be a ...

Thanks for the responses. I've never found that I forget or ignore punctuation while writing, but I can see that that might explain why mistakes are made so often. Now ...

Cara/Death Death was left standing on the ground, yelling after Falconstrike as she disappeared over the buildings. "Enjoy!" she finally spat, and turned around to see Flux and the other ...

Meh, only the nice kind. :P TUBM has just finished a review. A looong review.