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I'm not there yet, Aqua, but I might be soon. I'm pretty paranoid. :P I've been called arrogant and shy in the same school report.

((If anyone needs to jump in to post, Death's alone in the warehouse. :)))

((Sorry to post back-to-back, but I think this needs a bit of a kickstart. We're sort of chugging along at the moment. There are people who aren't posting, too... PMs ...

Okays, it's all done! I'm a dudette, by the way. ^_^

Hey, as requested, here's a review. I already did part of it before my computer died, so I'm having to redo the first couple of points. My patience may be ...

Jem. Easily depressed. Weather manipulation. "Something's following us!" Before Jem could reply, she felt a hand on her wrist, pulling her and then Helen to the ground. A split second ...

Aww. ^_^ Not quite sure how this would work in realistic terms, but that's never bothered me much when it comes to stories. I'll concern myself first of all with ...

'ello. Welcome to YWS, new person who's read the rules and actually done 2 reviews! I like you already. :) I usually do nitpicks, but I think this would benefit ...

Cara/Death The moments passed in a muddled blur. Falconstrike appearing, helping Mynah up , letting him get away, then falling, falling... and smiling. Who was she? And who was Mynah? ...

It's fine, Tex. :)

Hi. I didn't read the original, but maybe that'll help you out, an objective opinion and all. I'll answer your designated questions at the end, but I always do nitpicks ...

Hey, second review. Okay, nitpicks. Chemicals. I wrinkled my nose. The disgusting odor of chemicals Not sure about the repetition, it doesn't quite do it for me. Eww. This, too, ...

*sees Cats & Dogs poster* My little brother made me watch that. Sucks. Dogs FTW. Cats are evil little masterminds. :P

((Aqua, are you posting, or is Chups? At the moment you and Laina are still standing face to face. :P Jeez, and sorry this is so long! I got carried ...

He'll probably have to choose, at some point. We're still working out the kinks in PMs. :)