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((It'll work. We need something. You can post first, though, if that's okay. I'm having a bad day for writing. It's because I actually wrote yesterday. My mind is overloading. ...

Cara/Death "So, where d'you want to go now?" "Um, I don't know, but..." A thought suddenly occurred to her, and she giggled. "Did you leave the popcorn lying in the ...

Jet here. This is pretty short, so I'll just do a general critique rather than nitpicking this to death. :arrow: Firstly, and most importantly, sort out your dialogue punctuation! I'll ...

8/10 Nice imagery, but makes me think that the sadness is somehow making this person sweat, with the "droplets at the top of your brow". Seems odd... "I don't see ...

Inspired by Stop Crying Your Heart Out , Oasis. Listen to it in conjunction to this if you like. Also, this is pretty much my first draft, so help me ...

6/10 Makes me think, "What the hell?" And then sort of laugh, but the "what the hell" is overpowering... :P

7/10 Odd. ^^

listen to some relaxing music Or some new music. I find that helps; doing anything a little out of the ordinary can give you a bit of motivation to write. ...

Finished! Awesome as always, Art. :) Still looking for some reviews to get me motivated. I have more time than I thought, and half-term is coming up, so post here ...

Well, it's up to you... I think personally that we need to expose some members to the entire team at some point, but first it'd be good to have a ...

Hey again! Here as requested. Now, I'm not going to crit Chapter 1. I seriously think you should leave that alone for a bit; too much editing too early and ...

((That's fine by me. I can't think of anything else they would have done. Aha, only one scene where she has a knife at her throat. Just for the purpose ...

((I'm going to wait for Riders to post with Ghost's POV before I post again, so this is just a message: head over to the discussion thread, because there're a ...

Just bumping this a little. Posting at the moment, as in, recently, I think we have: bonnie babe ridersofdamar Jetpack AquaMarine gsppcrocks10 Moo Buggy Chupatoasta The others haven't posted in ...

Hey there, Summer! You know me from Secret Identity, so I'll get on with the review. I'm not a huge fan of romance, but your piece caught my eye, so ...