Jetpack

Hey. Evi gave you a great review, but I figure I'll add my penny's worth anyway. Few nitpicks, and then a general summary. nothing more. The pain grows once more. ...

Human, The Killers. :D

Me! Though I'm not entirely proud of it. now that the judges don't hate each other so much I actually miss the Simon/Louis banter. They've toned it down so much ...

Welcome to YWS! Okay, I know virtually nothing about the period you're writing about here - even your little introduction makes utterly no sense to me - and what I ...

xDD I look forward to that post.

I think you have a nice idea here, but you're too literal with it. You've used some pretty language, but basically you're just telling us your thoughts. This could be ...

Maybe not threaten Hannah, because then you'd have to follow up. A "ZOMGYOUSHAPESHIFT" (I'm loving this term) would basically sideline her for a bit. You think?

Sorry, I missed some of this. I would've worked you in. Never mind. I think Summer's ill, so it's going to be quite hard to have Mistique react to anything ...

Cara/Death She had heard the crash behind her as she reached the ground, but she didn't turn back. She couldn't. If Marrow had survived okay, he was strong enough to ...

Hey there, this is Jet, here to review. Prettyful jellyfish! :P 1. I don't like this one so much. The focus isn't very good, and the picture seems blurred, but ...

9/10 Unfortunately true.

Cara/Death Cara watched as Java shifted, and mouthed her approval. She almost wished she could do the same. The smoke was choking her, despite the teatowel wrapped around her face ...

((What's going on now? Summer, we kinda planned this for Java, Cara and Connor over in the DT... Any idea how we can work you in? :/ I won't mention ...

Sure it's cool, though I might not be able to post back tonight.

But that would drag absolutely everyone in, wouldn't it? Maybe it could be something small, like they go out and they see smoke. Maybe there's a fire nearby. Something like ...