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Fireflies - Owl City. ^^

((xDD Yes, okay. Made me laugh. :P)) Cara/Death "Can you do that too?" Hannah demanded, as Java shifted back to human form. He met Cara's gaze, but said nothing. "No," ...

7/10 The idea of a clan living in the woods sounds a bit odd. But I like the rest. I've only got a basic idea. It's still in the processing ...

Hey again. :) I don't think you have to show more background on Anna's mum, but to know it would improve your writing. As Lauren said, work out the detail ...

This is a shameless bump, and nothing more. Any requests? :D

xD Aqua. NP, I'll leave you to the "ZOMG!" thing though. Hope you feel better soon! Cara/Death "What! Java, you're going to tell her?" Java just shook his head, but ...

Hi, and welcome to YWS! You haven't posted in Welcome yet; even if you've already read the rules, it's a good place to refresh your memory - specifically on the ...

Hmm, interesting username. And you're Aqua's protege! ;) I'm Jet. Don't usually hang out over here in Welcome, but the username caught my attention. I'll probably end up critiquing something ...

Hey, this is Jet, here to review. I understand your decision to post this as one part, since as two you won't always get both halves reviewed, but posting something ...

Hey there, and welcome to YWS! Nice to see you've been reviewing and all. I'm Jet, by the way. It was said he killed someone. He never went to jail ...

A review for a review, shall we say? Call me Jet, by the way. Okay, first off, a bit of advice: don't crowd your writing with too many comments from ...

I used to think it was me, y’know, but now I ain’t so sure. Everyone’d say I was nuts, but people are always fallin’. It’s just, a lot of ‘em ...

Hello, Stream, and welcome to YWS. Make your way over to the Welcome forum to hear the rules in full, but one of the most important ones is the 3:1 ...

Luna 1 That's the link. I had that problem earlier. Just thought I'd help out. Pink Angel gave the link with the words "url" on the end, so it didn't ...

Hey, Jet here. Just a quick review, because this is generally beautifully written. I want to pick up on a few things I noticed just reading through, as it's short. ...