Jetpack

I genuinely can't find much to nitpick at here. You're right, this was refreshing, and it makes a change. The characters are so wonderfully drawn and you've got the little ...

Hey Pandora. I'm Jet. I think, as your piece is quite short, I'll give you a focussed general review rather than just nitpicking. First off, the positives. You have an ...

Hi, I'm Jet. This is my first review in a few months, so bear with me; I'll do my best. It went on, time did, and Eros became a man. ...

Hi all. I guess it's unlikely anyone remembers me from late 2009, but I've been lurking for a week or so and finally figured I'd log in again! Not sure ...

Did you say upcoming movie? Why oh why do I never hear about these things? xD

Here I am, Aqua. Sorry it took some time for me to get here! I'll make the review extra comprehensive to make up for it, but I'm not sure there's ...

Here I am, for review number 4! Okay, since this is the first real review you've had here, I guess I'll go over all the main points. :arrow: You're rushing ...

I think this is short enough for another line-by-line, so here we go! “Rose...” You could experiment with a few different chapter openings. Dialogue only goes so far. I entered ...

Hey, Bolt. These all sound like my sort of books, so I'll give you my opinion on them. As this is NaNoWriMo, though, I think the quality of the idea ...

The nitpicks have been generally well handled, so I think I just have to echo a few points here. Well, one point. Detail. This means characters, description, and plot. I'll ...

I haven't done a line-by-line like this in over a year, but I figure it'll be easier to pinpoint areas I'd like to talk about, and I already had a ...

Whoa. I'll get to it when I can, but I've just got new glasses and staring at the computer is making me dizzy. Of Loss and Love, I Of Loss ...

((Course. Your opinion will be evaluated by my supercomputer, and then shredded by my ego. You're right, though. :lol:))

Though this is all brilliant advice, I'm worried about over -planning. Is that possible? I'm trying to reach a happy medium, but I think if I overanalyse things I'll just ...

((Yes, but that's what the discussion thread was for in the beginning, and people don't appear to be using it. Well, we'll give it a day and see if anyone ...