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For capitalising General Ignorance in your signature, à la QI. :D

Enyalius As soon as they arrived at the village, Enyalius pulled the hood of his cape over his head to cover his face. In the forest, facing the guards, he ...

Hey, I'm Jet. I clicked on this primarily because it has the same name as a Linkin Park song, which seems odd. Was that intentional? Anyway, I'm not really sure ...

For having an avatar that makes me smile every time I see it. xD

Hi, I'm Jet, and welcome to YWS! In future, before you post work, spell check it first. The title should be, "The Apocalypse: Prologue", and that spelling of apocalypse applies ...

Jetpacks are cool. 8)

I claim Dark, female Air Immortal! I'm confused as to how Immortals will die, though. Ordinary wounds inflicted by other Immortals? Name: Cathy Lyon Age : Anyone's guess. She looks ...

Enyalius "So, where exactly are we going?" the young woman asked, still following close behind Enyalius. " I'm going to a little camp on the other side of these woods, ...

Hey, Jet here to give you a quick review. I'm avoiding nitpicking for the moment, because you can write clearly and cohesively and there are no glaring punctuation errors. You ...

You have a very intriguing start here, but I think you need to work on the emotional value of the piece, predominantly. There are also a few punctuation errors, which ...

I'd appreciate a review on Pygmalion . It's based on a myth, the link to which is in the spoiler at the end of the story. Any kind of comment ...

*recovers very old thread* I figured there was no point starting a new one, so this is open again. All the guidelines on the front page still apply. If you ...

As this is for a contest, I'll nitpick, so don't think I'm being harsh! My whole body was bone-numbingly cold. Is "bone-numbingly" a word? I suppose it is, but it's ...

((I don't think it's your fault at all, Fox. You can't force everybody to post. I guess they will when they can. :)))

Rated 12+ for suggestion/content. Nothing too worrying, though. Those luminescent firefly eyes blink at me in the darkness, and Lady Night lifts a soft hand to touch my cheek with ...