JesusFreak

THat was really good. I dont under stand what the line "Just a clatter as his angel hit the floor." has to do with the rest of the poem. I ...

I do not like the book Twilight that much, but, looking at artistic abilities that is pretty good. I would suggest using color or making the black darker. There are ...

Over all that was really good. I did think though that some of the lines seemed to full and didn't flow with the rest of the piece. Another thing, though ...

This was good. My favorite part was the first verse. You probably have a tune that works but I think that for the chorus my tune would work better if ...

That was really good. I would definitely listen to this song if it were on the radio.

I liked this a lot. The part that stood out to me the most was how you repeated the beginning of the song at the end. Since no one else ...

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I try to watch it--and I enjoy watching it--I just forget to watch it. I agree--Merry can get annoying.

I think it depends on what you are writing, but, as long as you get your point across to the reader, then you can forget grammar. I am probably just ...

I don't carry a notebook, but I find anything to write on. Most of the time I have to use my arm or the back of a recite. The only ...

I'm staring at you through a one way window I see you but you don't see me I am in love with you But you don't even know my name ...

This is a good song. I like chorus a lot. I especially like the line "That is why I stand in the rain So no one can see me crying." ...

I thought that this was really good. my favorite verse is the second verse. It does a really good job of discribing the depth of the emotion. I think the ...

Verse 1 You feel beaten and bruised Like you're not good enough Like no matter what you do You aren't seen Everyone looks at you From the outside in The ...