Jessey

That was great! I loved the fact that you put Stephanie in the story. She definitely used the same words over, and over, and over, and over, and...you get my ...

Ah! That was awesome! I am still sitting here laughing. I'm not a Twilight Saga fan, as a mater of fact I rather dislike it. That was very good. That's ...

The imagery was amazing! I felt so bad for little Carrie. At the end when her mama came and found her was a very good ending. At first I did ...

Pretty cool. You need to check grammar though. I think the twins thing was kinda cool. I would love to see more of the story, keep writing. The title definitely ...

I like the angle that you took this picture at. It's a very clear picture too. The white background is kind of boring. Maybe try something with a little color ...

Aw. It's cue. It reminds me of a little girl. The ear needs to be a little higher. Ears are usually inline with they eyes. Also the nose is a ...

Ooohhh Princess Bride is one of my favorite movies! Around his mouth and the eye on the left side of the page were the first things that jumped out at ...

I liked this a lot. I'm a very musical person and I know how frustrating it is learning a new instrument. I liked the fact that it was all to ...

I found that very hard to read. As others have said, go through your story and check it. When you are talking about strangers taking you in the beginning is ...

Ooh that was really good. It definitely pulled me in and made me want to keep reading. Chad is a rather static character and he seems like you were trying ...

Wow that was good. It did sound a lot like something out of a chicken soup book though. It was emotionally attaching and good for reading. I wanted to keep ...

Wow. That was really touching. I almost teared up. Like Herzing said It is people like you that change the world. Thank you so much. I hope every thing goes ...

WOW!!!! Those are amazing!! It does seem like there is a lot of hair in the first one. I love the second one best. When I name my drawings/sketches I ...

Hands are very difficult to draw. You did a rather good job of it though. I did notice that the thumb was a little awkward. It should be turned a ...

Wow! That's really good. You need to work on proportions though. For the nose, when you are looking straight on at a face you don't usually see nostrils. Look in ...