Jessa

Poem 9 Troubling Lasts Our first kiss, was a kiss of death. I didn't know then, that was my last breath. After the kiss, I felt the burn. Now for ...

Heyy! I liked it a lot! The flow was great and the rhymes did not seem too forced. It also held my attention until the very end. I didn't find ...

Alright, here we go. red = fixes in your text blue = comments on what I suggested orange = side notes I thought I could trust you , --> comma ...

Poem number 8! (Look at me I'm ahead!) Voicemail I could be outside, I could be working. I could be hiding, in the bushes lurking. All I know is that, ...

Poem 7...they are getting random! People in the World The world is big, the world is green. Filled with people, many are mean. Some take money, others steal cars. These ...

Poem number 6 Just Fishing Yes this is a poem, about a girl and a boy. They live in the same town, in the heart of Illinois. He loves her, ...

This poem is also being used for the NaPo contest, but I wanted feedback on it. Please let me know what needs fixing :) Just Fishing Yes this is a ...

Poems 4 and 5! Smile A simple smile could change it all. It's a pick me up after a rough fall.   The smile on your face could change someone's ...

Poem number three! Missing You The bomb shells above are raining, as my tears leave my cheeks feeling wet. My fellow soldiers are all moaning, as without you my heart ...

Here is poem number two! (I'm trying to catch up!) Last one Standing Recess should always be fun, but for me it was a bore. Everyone runs around playing, while ...

Here is the start of my poetry thread. I hope I can keep this up for the entire month. I am rating this 12+ just in case I throw a ...

Earlier this school year, my English class had to write "letters to Emily Dickinson." Within my letter I wrote a poem. Death and dying was the theme of many of ...

Hey! I thought this was very cute! My favorite part was the ending... Because the love I have for you, Is powered by the love you have, For me. I ...

Haha you could listen to it on the radio if the person who is writing the music for it would ever finish! Lol. But I'm glad you like it! -Jessa

dregymayfield - I know love is hard to explain. That is how this started. My friend asked me what love was...and I told her I didn't know how to explain ...