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Heyy! This was really good. It spoke to me, because I walk through the halls most days and feel like I am wearing a mask just trying to get by ...

Thanks everyone I appreciate it! These edits/comments are exactly what I was hoping for! stargazer9927 - If this is in the wrong forum I apologize. I didn't know what to ...

This pierce of the knife you throw towards me, spins and twists and turns, and it jets deeper into my heart. Eternally making me feel pain, every time you walk ...

animekaratepup - Thanks for the edits on my poem. I will fix them :) -------------------------------------------- Poem 14 Opposites If you go left, then I go right. If I want to ...

Wow. Wow. Wow. I loved this! You did a very good job writing this and I NEED to read more :) I didn't find any major errors and I thought ...

This was great! I loved the story in the beginning and then telling people it was all a lie, brilliant! I think you would like to read this was written ...

Thanks everyone! That was helpful. I will work on chopping up the lines some more, so it is more interesting :)

Poem 13 The Died as touch I am king Died as look at my skill, everything I touch I immediately kill. It happened today, in the most peculiar way. My ...

Hello everyone, I need some help. I write a lot of things that are a cross between poems and short stories. They hardly ever rhyme [which to me means they ...

Poem 12 Writers Block I’m trying to get through some bad writer’s block. Which puts me in a big race against the clock.   I have agreed to write a ...

Hey! This was great I loved it! What a strong way to start your posts here at YWS :) I wouldn't change anything about it. Well done, keep it up! ...

Heyy Mal! Welcome to YWS! To answer your question... Where is this chatroom you speak of? The chat room is on the front page in the center. When you look ...

I'm not really sure what type of writing this I thought it would be safe to stick it in the "other" category. I hope you enjoy it! I can see ...

Heyy! This is awesome! I feel like you depicted writing in a very beautiful way. Most people do not realize how much thought and effort it takes to write something. ...

Heyy! I loved this! They are questions I ask all the time! The imagery was amazing and the flow was good too. I usually don’t care for poems when they ...