Jessa

Hey Peach! Welcome to YWS!! I hope you find this site very enjoyable (I know I do!) I also love music, but I can't sing very well myself! My name ...

Here as requested! Blue = comment Red = fix You make me smile You make me laugh You make it okay You make me want to beg you to stay ...

Thanks everyone! I just made changes to the story, I hope it reads better now. Keep the edits/comments coming!!!

Here as requested! I really liked it. It was easy to visualize everything that was going on, as well as what the mother was going through. One thing.... I hadn’t ...

I've been trying to practice using images and descriptive words - things that allow the reader to see what is going on. So that is what inspired me to write ...

I must say this is written very well! I am very faithful to my religion and I love how you pointed out the simplicities of loving God and following through ...

Thanks for giving me more edits! I have made some more changes. Keep edits/comments coming!

Everyone, First of all, I’d like to thank you for your sympathy. It has been a rough couple of days. Also, thank you so much for your edits and comments. ...

Hey! I liked this piece a lot. The questions were sweet. I find one little part hard to understand though... But what would you say if It is I who ...

Is life ever really that bad that it needs to be taken? Is life ever really too much that it cannot go on? The urge to never walk, never laugh, ...

Cupcake - Thanks for the edit, and, Im glad you liked my poem :)

I liked this a lot! I love the way you captured the complexity of the relationship. The rhyme you kept throughout the whole poem was good too! :] There was ...

Wow, when is this contest over? Here are a few more RaNdOm poems :) -------------------------------------------------------------- Poem 18 This is Hard This isn’t what we expected, who could have gu

Cassie --> Thank you so much for your review! It was so helpful :) I made a few of your changes, and a few others I had found. I hope ...

If you think there are too many love poems. Take a moment to observe. Hang on tight, you might be wrong, and the answer, I will serve. The secret truth ...