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Heyy! Here for an edit! Blue = comment Red = edit Dear Heart, I told you. I warned you. I even begged you. To stop, To stay, To wait. You ...

Heyy! Here to review your poem!! For the most part I liked it, but in the middle the flow gets a little choppy. You start out with a good flow ...

Heyy! I thought this was very creative! Well done. I love how you rhymed with the letters L. O. V. E. that added a very unique element to the poem! ...

Heyy! I'm here to review your poem! It is short, but I sence it has a deep story behind it. Here is my review... Alone, thinking of you I sat ...

Heyy! I have some edits for you. Blue = comments Red = edits Stalker, stalker, following me, outside my house, and in my tree. Binoculars are in your hand. Collect ...

Heyy! This made me laugh, but there was one part that stumped me... Happy Birthday, my child! You’re now officially a teen. And according to society , you’re rebellious and ...

PLEASE help me out with edits on this story. I just wrote it wanted to share it with all of you! Lay on the edits!

You should wash your mouth out with soap for saying you are bad at poetry ;) I loved this!! It was great, although I agree this is more of a ...

Thanks for the nice comments everyone! I appreciate it that you took the time to read my poem! Pokemonbragirl - Yikes! I am so happy you read this poem if ...

Wow, it has been a while since I posted my poems! ----------------------------------------------------------------- Poem 22 Pull the Trigger Is life ever really that bad that it needs to be taken? Is ...

Hey! I found one little typo in the thrid stanza, In a whim we'de bring them --> we'de should be we'd dancing, making the trip, Drifting like essence from our ...

Heyy! I do think this makes sense! However, I think it would be nice if you could tell us more! I am frozen as the tears stream down my face. ...

Hey! Fortunately I don't know what it feels like to hate myself, but I know what it feels like to hate someone and be hated by someone. It doesn't feel ...

Oh my gosh in loved this!!!!! I actually laughed out loud while reading it. This poem fits me (and probably a lot of other people) perfectly. Every time I open ...

As if you haven't heard this enough, WELCOME TO YWS! I think you will fit in very well here, especially if you have already written a novel! :] Just a ...