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Jessa

Jessa

  • Lyric Poetry Re: Dad is a Label

    Background of the poem: earlier this week my friend was telling me how frustrating it was for her to buy a Father's Day card for her dad because he has ...

    Jun 19, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: I Do?

    As each of the buttons on my dress are latched, I feel the close of my single life. I know in a few short minutes, I will become your wife. ...

    Jun 16, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: From Daddy to Daughter

    Hi Des :) I loved it, brought tears to my eyes. You are going to be an amazing daddy one day. Found nothing wrong with it at all!

    Jun 10, 2011
  • Welcome Mat Re: Oh Look

    Hey Scotty! I'm Jessa. Welcome to YWS! This place is awesome (as you will soon find out). Everyone here is really nice and helpful. It is important to remember to ...

    Jun 9, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: If I told you

    Edits and comments are appreciated! : ) If I told you about forever, would you choose to stay? Or would you feel trapped and try to run away? If I ...

    Jun 7, 2011
  • General Articles Re: Dear Santa

    Lol this is great! I loved how you took such a cheery subject such as santa and made him into a creepy person. I didn't find anything wrong with it. ...

    Jun 3, 2011
  • Welcome Mat Re: Um, hi?

    Hey Leigh, Welcome to the site! I'm sure within two weeks of being on YWS you will become addicted (I know I was). As others have already said, everyone on ...

    May 29, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Blissterful

    This was a really nice poem! It was very creative and the format was unique. I did not find any major edits, but I just had a few comments/suggestion :] ...

    May 26, 2011
  • Other Poetry Re: No Need to Whisper

    I will be your first reviewer :] I offer you my love, My soul, My very physique; All within your grasp, If you can win this game of hide-and-seek… -->Nice ...

    May 26, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Red Dusk

    This is the first thing I have written in a long time. I have had writers block so bad that I resorted to looking up prompts online to give me ...

    May 24, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Choices

    Please help me out with this poem. Any types of comments or suggestions are appreciated! Enjoy :] -------- “Don’t look back when you could look forward.” This phrase is, Overused. ...

    May 20, 2011
  • Welcome Mat Re: Yo.

    Heyy Curse! Welcome to YWS! I'm not good at introductions either, but I thought yours was fine. :] I am still pretty new to the site, but you catch on ...

    May 19, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: To my Demon

    I haven't posted anything for a while because the curse of writers block has taken over. This is my attempt to break free of this curse, so tell me what ...

    May 13, 2011
  • Lounge, The Re: Free Signatures...

    Heyy! This sounds awesome! What exactly do I need to rell you in order to make one? -Jessa

    May 12, 2011
  • Action/Adventure Short Stories Re: Torture Chamber

    Hey everyone! I am getting the feeling that you all want to know more about what happened to the man in the cell, so I am going to write a ...

    May 4, 2011


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