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Re: Dad is a Label
Background of the poem: earlier this week my friend was telling me how frustrating it was for her to buy a Father's Day card for her dad because he has ...
Jun 19, 2011 -
Re: I Do?
As each of the buttons on my dress are latched, I feel the close of my single life. I know in a few short minutes, I will become your wife. ...
Jun 16, 2011 -
Re: From Daddy to Daughter
Hi Des :) I loved it, brought tears to my eyes. You are going to be an amazing daddy one day. Found nothing wrong with it at all!
Jun 10, 2011 -
Re: Oh Look
Hey Scotty! I'm Jessa. Welcome to YWS! This place is awesome (as you will soon find out). Everyone here is really nice and helpful. It is important to remember to ...
Jun 9, 2011 -
Re: If I told you
Edits and comments are appreciated! : ) If I told you about forever, would you choose to stay? Or would you feel trapped and try to run away? If I ...
Jun 7, 2011 -
Re: Dear Santa
Lol this is great! I loved how you took such a cheery subject such as santa and made him into a creepy person. I didn't find anything wrong with it. ...
Jun 3, 2011 -
Re: Um, hi?
Hey Leigh, Welcome to the site! I'm sure within two weeks of being on YWS you will become addicted (I know I was). As others have already said, everyone on ...
May 29, 2011 -
Re: Blissterful
This was a really nice poem! It was very creative and the format was unique. I did not find any major edits, but I just had a few comments/suggestion :] ...
May 26, 2011 -
Re: No Need to Whisper
I will be your first reviewer :] I offer you my love, My soul, My very physique; All within your grasp, If you can win this game of hide-and-seek… -->Nice ...
May 26, 2011 -
Re: Red Dusk
This is the first thing I have written in a long time. I have had writers block so bad that I resorted to looking up prompts online to give me ...
May 24, 2011 -
Re: Choices
Please help me out with this poem. Any types of comments or suggestions are appreciated! Enjoy :] -------- “Don’t look back when you could look forward.” This phrase is, Overused. ...
May 20, 2011 -
Re: Yo.
Heyy Curse! Welcome to YWS! I'm not good at introductions either, but I thought yours was fine. :] I am still pretty new to the site, but you catch on ...
May 19, 2011 -
Re: To my Demon
I haven't posted anything for a while because the curse of writers block has taken over. This is my attempt to break free of this curse, so tell me what ...
May 13, 2011 -
Re: Free Signatures...
Heyy! This sounds awesome! What exactly do I need to rell you in order to make one? -Jessa
May 12, 2011 -
Re: Torture Chamber
Hey everyone! I am getting the feeling that you all want to know more about what happened to the man in the cell, so I am going to write a ...
May 4, 2011
