Jessa

Last night, I felt inspired...and came up with this. I am thinking about evolving this into a short story of some sort, but I feel like it needs some work. ...

Hey Luka! I'm sure if you like to read and write that this site will be a great fit for you! I still consider myself semi-new here, but I have ...

Hey! I thought you did a very good job of trying to paint the reader a picture of what you were trying to say, instead of telling them straight out. ...

I want to feel your silence. Get lost in your world of absence; where everything feels more distant than it really is. Where laughter knows no sound and screams are ...

Somewhere With You (Kenny Chesney) What are you trying to do?

a Tiny Bubble (Paul McCartney) [this is a sweet game!] What is your favorite thing to shout?

Here to review! This was a very unique poem, I have never seen a poem written about this topic (until today). Just one thing... Flows with water, breathes with air, ...

Here to review for you! I liked your poem. While I could tell it was dripping with emotion, it didn't really allow me to feel your pain. When I read ...

Here for a review! Your poem was nice, especially for your first poem :] One thing I noticed though, was that you said the same thing over and over again ...

Everyone, Thanks for your reviews, but this story isn't about a break is about an addiction. I will fix my spelling mistakes that were caught. If you could give me ...

This story I have written is for a contest. Objective: turn a love song into a story romance can be in the story. I was assigned the song "Here We ...

Hey Cat! Welcome to YWS! I would love to help you out with some advice...but I am also not sure what advice to give you. I hope you are finding ...

Hey Jade! First of all, thanks for giving me some feedback on my poem. Second, WELCOME TO YWS! You are going to love it here. Everyone is very friendly. A ...

I pick up the phone, then set it back down. You made me feel like a princess, then took away my crown. Still, I long for us to talk, to ...

Finally with the in crowd, on stage for people to see. I have made many sacrifices, causing this disaster no one could foresee. It started slow, but snowballed fast. I'm ...