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Jessa

Jessa

  • Lyric Poetry Re: Shatterproof

    Tommybear - I liked your idea for the last line to be changed and I was actually thinking about adding more to the background behind this poem tomorrow during school ...

    Mar 9, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Shatterproof

    Thank you for the review and for welcoming me! Yes, you are correct it was glass that was separating the two characters. The one who is speaking in the story ...

    Mar 8, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Shatterproof

    Edited Version Thanks to everyone who gave me suggestions. I hope the ending has improved since the last verison. Please let me know what you think! I see you, but ...

    Mar 8, 2011
  • Welcome Mat Re: A Bit About Me :)

    Alright, I'll post it :) How do we get started on the poem? And what are we going to write about?

    Mar 8, 2011
  • Welcome Mat Re: A Bit About Me :)

    Oh yeah good point. That might be a problem, but it would be awesome if you could join! And the troubles with my poem: I like the idea of it ...

    Mar 8, 2011
  • Welcome Mat Re: A Bit About Me :)

    Wow how do you perform things on YWS? That sounds fun. I bet that would be funny do have him try to help you write a love scene...but it would ...

    Mar 8, 2011
  • Welcome Mat Re: A Bit About Me :)

    Snoink, Yes it is a lot of fun to have a twin and being identical can be fun at sometime, annoying at others. It is fun when we can trick ...

    Mar 8, 2011
  • Welcome Mat Re: A Bit About Me :)

    Hey Meg, Yes you are correct we do live together and we do most of our writing on paper and then compare our ideas before typing them. But I will ...

    Mar 8, 2011
  • Narrative Poetry Re: Daddy's Little Girl

    I loved this poem. It showed a lot of emotion and it was easy to relate to what you were saying. I am the oldest of three girls, so I ...

    Mar 7, 2011
  • Welcome Mat Re: Hi everyone! I'm new here!

    Hey Shanelle, I am new here too and I also love reading fantacy and listening to music. (Country is my favorite). I agree that this place is really nice and ...

    Mar 7, 2011
  • Welcome Mat Re: A Bit About Me :)

    Hello Everyone! My name is Jessa and I am obviously new to the site. I love to write poems and letters (much like my sister, Kayde2). Yes, we are twins. ...

    Mar 7, 2011


Writing is my soul made tangible on paper.
— bluewaterlily