Jessa

One leg to touch, Two legs to feel. Three legs to clutch, Four legs to reel.  Five legs to creep, Six legs to crawl. Seven legs to leap, Eight legs ...

I thought this was amazing! I loved the format. I found myself urging to read the next line. I'm sorry I did not find any edits. But the one thing ...

JoJo, Termination is what inspired this poem. We were talking about it in my religion class on friday and it made me very angry. I figured it would be a ...

First of all I'd like to thank all of you for the comments, they are very useful! I will be working on edits for this poem (if it is even ...

Hey! I really liked this poem! It was different than any other kind of poem I have ever read before. It was sweet how you used statistics to make up ...

I would love to have input on this poem. If you take the time to read it, please take the time to say something. Even if you simply hate it, ...

Hey Meg! I don't think you have anything to worry about. All of the voices sounded real (as someone would say them). I loved the message this piece had. Believing ...

WritersUnleashed and Kafkaescence, Thank you for your edits/opinions. They will help me a lot :) -Jessa

kimalane21 - You hit it exactly correct! I wrote this poem because I'm pretty sure I failed my Pre-Calc test today. I am glad you were able to catch that. ...

My stomach is turning, spinning very fast. My head is pounding, like a bomb about to blast. My hands are sweating, smoldering, very charred. My eyes are watering, like the ...

Very nice poem! I thought you did a very good job showing us the emotions instead of just telling them right out to us. There was one part of the ...

Hey Rachel, Welcome to YWS! I also like to write poetry and find this site very helpful. I would recommend you review others work before submitting your own. This way ...

Very nice poem! I loved how everything flowed and had a beat. Other then the changes that were already stated, I would not change a thing. My favorite part of ...

Bolshevik - I appreciate the input, but if it was as easy as breaking the glass then there would be no need for the poem :) Inkwell - I am ...

Aww this poem made me cry. I loved it! I really like it when poems have a ton of emotion in them. My favorite part was when you were saying ...