Jessa

Hey! I thought this was very nice, and since everyone else already did a good joy pointing out the mistakes I will just praise your poem. :) I loved the ...

Alright, I'm here to give you your edits! There are not many, but it is going to look like a lot! Page: 2 As they did as he asked, he ...

So, this is a song I wrote for a friend. It started out just being a poem, but then they told me to make it into a song. This song ...

Hey! First of all, this was amazing! The way you worded each line made me want to keep reading! I also have very vivid dreams (when I decide to go ...

Hey! I loved this! You are very good at writing poems in two minutes ;) I could easily relate to this poem, because it reminds me of some things my ...

Haha that review made me smile! I am really glad you liked it! I will seriously try to add more to the story...I have a few ideas of how to ...

Yes I have read those books! They are amazing! I love to read, although now that I have started writing more I find it challenging to read books because I ...

Alright, this is my attempt at a sci-fi story. I was forced to write one for my creative writing class and this is what I came up with. Let me ...

Kathy, Welcome to YWS! I am happy you said you like to write about teenagers (Most people can't stand us). haha. What kinds of things do you like to write? ...

Thanks guys! I'm glad you liked it :) And I changed that line, thanks for the edit! -Jessa

Welcome Dani! It is nice to have you on the site! This is a great place to get your work reviewed, but it is important to not let any comments ...

Heyy Kay! I like how this turned out! I know you worked on it a lot and I think your hard work payed off! I especially love the ending of ...

Thanks, I'm glad you liked it. Those four lines were the most difficult ones to write, but they are my favorite too! -Jessa

Yesterday, today, and tomorrow – Words that mean so much, But are noticed so little.   Representing the days gone by, The seconds in the now, And all of the ...

Hey Everyone! Thank you for taking your time to review my poem! I am glad you liked it. As for the ABAB vs. ABCB I did this on purpose, but ...