Young Writers Society

Here is my submission for the contest . It is titled Crumbling. I hope you enjoy it. Looking forward to reading other contest entries!

I have been working on a novel for a few months now and I keep hitting a wall. Well, actually I keep stopping because I am overwhelmed with questions inside ...

Haven't posted anything in a while. I just haven't written anything good I guess. So help me out with this! (Feel free to give me title suggestions too) Thanks! You ...

Isn't that basically what I just said?

Isn't it weird how the word "coach" looks like the word "couch"?

I'm a bit rusty on my writing. Please help me make this poem better :) thanks! I'll be the first to admit this is all a mistake, but we promise ...

Hey! I personally enjoy writing poems (especially about this topic) so I will try to give you some useful edits! Okay, so the main issue I am having while I ...

Hmm this is intriguing...I'm going to try to help. Correct me if I'm wrong but, I notice that you have an AABA rhyme throughout the entire poem...and that the stanzas ...

Hey. This was a very clever poem and (being the nerd that I am) the title drew me to read it. I have a few comments though. Chemical love You’re ...

Hi there. I am a little rusty on my review skills, but I'll try to make this worthwhile. I read The Outsiders back when I was in 7th grade and ...

I tried to follow a format with this poem instead of going freestyle. So I would love any input anyone has :] --- I know I said I wouldn't do ...

Hey! This is really good. I like the observation you made in writing this poem. But...there is one thing that I would try to fix. Punctuation adds a lot to ...

Okay, I don't think I have ever reviewed photography (even though I love taking pictures), but I will give it a shot. Photo One This tree picture is awesome! [I'm ...

You have an interesting poem here. What was your inspiration? I'm going to try to give you a good review...but I apologize if it isn't good since I haven't reviewed ...

Hey guys thanks for your feedback. I was aware of the movie/book "Dear John" but when I wrote this I completely forgot the book and movie even existed! I was ...