Jess_14

It's interesting, but I think you ended too aburptly and it needs someting more, to flow into a smoother ending. Hope this helped :D

This poem is amazing, like all your work that I've read so far. But this time it was easier to understand, so I found it more enjoyable. Keep up the ...

I love it, it's so dark and raw the energy is amazing :D

I love this poem! I think if you added more rythm to it, it would be easier to read for the reader and istantly become more popular. But I don't ...

I loved the rythm and flow of this poem, but what does it mean? To be more accurate: why did you choose to write about neon in association with wedding ...

I loved it! Especially the rythm of leaves and harmony in this stanza: Autumn breaks And sheds its leaves, Take aware the season’s welcome, Remember its brave departure. Cause autumn ...

Thanks! ^_^ I've made some changes, but I'm still working on it! And you were right about Unwated, I meant to title it Unwanted, lol

I enjoyed reading this poem. I loved the part about his tongue being so sharp that one day it'll slice his throat, although I would omit the word 'own' before ...

Why is Kara so upset over not being liked by as many guys as Kristy?

I loved this poem. It sounds Russian. =) But really, I loved it!

Unwanted, Empty locker room - cold You can hear the crowd cheering, and you feel all alone. No one to look for you, but not that you deserve. Still wouldn't ...

I absolutely loved this poem. It was so perfect.

i loved this poem. it is beautiful! the title really seems to make sense, too. i read this poem as of about people who have wasted their lives away, who ...