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Jennya

  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: ...Make Lemonade

    Wow! I loved this. Great work and a nice laugh. The end was fantastic. It read a little to much like a romance novel at some parts and the language ...

    Jun 27, 2011
  • Fantasy Novels Re: Hanged

    Hey, It's review day and i have come to review! I don't usually review novels but here I go anyway. I'm going to take it part by part and then ...

    Jun 26, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Secrets of the seed

    It's review day! And I have come to review. This is a nice simple poem, I quite like it. It has a nice feel to it and a relatively good ...

    Jun 26, 2011
  • Art & Photography Re: Light

    Something I have been working on, need help with the hair ( which is not meant to look real, more like water) and the eyes. I took this with my ...

    Jun 25, 2011
  • Narrative Poetry Re: Dancers

    I love this. Very beautiful little poem, you should be proud. This is going to be a very bad review as I can't think of many bad things to say. ...

    Jun 23, 2011
  • Randomosity Re: cranky family

    points: 10 Okay, I will kill Godzilla with my magic powers and get you some paint. Godzilla's corpse fell and squashed my sister! :O

    Jun 23, 2011
  • Art & Photography Re: Gluttony (Finished, finally)

    Nice, the juxtaposition of the fat person and the starving kids will be great. Are you actually going to use foods ? I'm a little confused. If you pull it ...

    Jun 23, 2011
  • Art & Photography Re: A Girl

    Nice, faces happen to be something I'm good at so I think I can give you some good pointers. Firstly this is pretty awesome for something from the imagination. Things ...

    Jun 22, 2011
  • Art & Photography Re: 32. Night

    Nice, If I where you I would be very happy with his result. I could totally see this in a game for some reason. I might post something for 100 ...

    Jun 22, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: The Old Piano

    I love this, short and sweet. Captures a great moment. Watch the 'I', sorry for the short review.

    Jun 22, 2011
  • Art & Photography Re: Romeo and Juliet at Capulet's Ball

    Hey, Nice work! Quite pretty, it reminds me of Zefferelli's Romeo and Juliet, one of the best adaptations of the play. Although the image looks a little fuzzy, maybe find ...

    Jun 22, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Drive

    I literally wrote this in five minutes, not sure if it belongs in Lyric Poetry. I wanted to write something that was not so structured. Thanks for reading. Cold life ...

    Jun 22, 2011
  • Art & Photography Re: Life and Death (working title??)

    Nice, you really made a really great country themed work! In general i think its quite fantastic, the juxtaposition of skull and the flowers does create a sort of poetic ...

    Jun 21, 2011
  • Other Poetry Re: Life

    Nice, A rather common topic but I think you have handled it well. I'm a defiantly no grammar expert and I think the rules of grammar can be pushed a ...

    Jun 21, 2011
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Understanding in a car crash.

    Today was the day I died, the final day of my sordid little life yet the beginning of something new. I know what you’re thinking; the pain, the agony, my ...

    Jun 8, 2011


That, sir, is the most frightening battlefield in the world: the blank page.
— Larry McMurtry, Comanche Moon