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Re: ...Make Lemonade
Wow! I loved this. Great work and a nice laugh. The end was fantastic. It read a little to much like a romance novel at some parts and the language ...
Jun 27, 2011 -
Re: Hanged
Hey, It's review day and i have come to review! I don't usually review novels but here I go anyway. I'm going to take it part by part and then ...
Jun 26, 2011 -
Re: Secrets of the seed
It's review day! And I have come to review. This is a nice simple poem, I quite like it. It has a nice feel to it and a relatively good ...
Jun 26, 2011 -
Re: Light
Something I have been working on, need help with the hair ( which is not meant to look real, more like water) and the eyes. I took this with my ...
Jun 25, 2011 -
Re: Dancers
I love this. Very beautiful little poem, you should be proud. This is going to be a very bad review as I can't think of many bad things to say. ...
Jun 23, 2011 -
Re: cranky family
points: 10 Okay, I will kill Godzilla with my magic powers and get you some paint. Godzilla's corpse fell and squashed my sister! :O
Jun 23, 2011 -
Re: Gluttony (Finished, finally)
Nice, the juxtaposition of the fat person and the starving kids will be great. Are you actually going to use foods ? I'm a little confused. If you pull it ...
Jun 23, 2011 -
Re: A Girl
Nice, faces happen to be something I'm good at so I think I can give you some good pointers. Firstly this is pretty awesome for something from the imagination. Things ...
Jun 22, 2011 -
Re: 32. Night
Nice, If I where you I would be very happy with his result. I could totally see this in a game for some reason. I might post something for 100 ...
Jun 22, 2011 -
Re: The Old Piano
I love this, short and sweet. Captures a great moment. Watch the 'I', sorry for the short review.
Jun 22, 2011 -
Re: Romeo and Juliet at Capulet's Ball
Hey, Nice work! Quite pretty, it reminds me of Zefferelli's Romeo and Juliet, one of the best adaptations of the play. Although the image looks a little fuzzy, maybe find ...
Jun 22, 2011 -
Re: Drive
I literally wrote this in five minutes, not sure if it belongs in Lyric Poetry. I wanted to write something that was not so structured. Thanks for reading. Cold life ...
Jun 22, 2011 -
Re: Life and Death (working title??)
Nice, you really made a really great country themed work! In general i think its quite fantastic, the juxtaposition of skull and the flowers does create a sort of poetic ...
Jun 21, 2011 -
Re: Life
Nice, A rather common topic but I think you have handled it well. I'm a defiantly no grammar expert and I think the rules of grammar can be pushed a ...
Jun 21, 2011 -
Re: Understanding in a car crash.
Today was the day I died, the final day of my sordid little life yet the beginning of something new. I know what you’re thinking; the pain, the agony, my ...
Jun 8, 2011
