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Re: Nameless - 2
The night grew old, his fellow knights had all lost their sense of decency under the influence of the amber nectar. He though about creating a scandal, pictures of him ...
Jul 17, 2011 -
Re: Occlumency Lessons
Nice, I agree with the other viewer it did feel like JK. Like you fan fiction is very new to me but since Harry Potter is coming to an end ...
Jul 17, 2011 -
Re: Completely Ordinary
Nice! I really liked your synopsis, It really drew me in. I really loved the relationship dynamic between the brother and sister. I could actually see them arguing like that. ...
Jul 15, 2011 -
Re: Resisting Rhys
Hey, I like the plot! but it sounds a little to much like a romantic comedy movie I watched once. It fairly old came out at least six years ago. ...
Jul 13, 2011 -
Re: Attracted?
Welcome to YWS! I like to pretend I'm a poet but really that's just a little fantasy of mine. There's a a nice big decent chunk of poets in the ...
Jul 13, 2011 -
Re: The stranger
Nice, I agree with the other reviews the simplicity and the meaning of this poem are quite neat. You have described quite nicely the topic. Your poem is very relate-able ...
Jul 9, 2011 -
Re: The stranger
Nice, I agree with the other reviews the simplicity and the meaning of this poem are quite neat. You have described quite nicely the topic. Your poem is very relate-able ...
Jul 9, 2011 -
Re: Nameless
Not the full chapter, condensed for your enjoyment. Please do tell me what you think. my writers feed pad link for all those who are interested. Also I have done ...
Jul 8, 2011 -
Re: Socially Awkward
I know how you feel. I too need flirting lessons, but then again I just don't flirt, not with anyone. Nice little story, very brave of you to post something ...
Jul 8, 2011 -
Re: Reaper
The first thing I noticed about this was it's length. It is really long, maybe next time separate chapters into parts for easy reading. In the description of the novel, ...
Jul 4, 2011 -
Re: Super Honeymoon
Hey, nice work. This is chalk pastel I assume? But really nice work. Did you use fixative as a finish? Because fixative is a must for chalks,unless you want your ...
Jul 4, 2011 -
Re: Are you writing a novel?
Trying to write a novel would be a better answer. My novel is set in a modern fantasy world ( magic and technology) basically the Humans have become very powerful ...
Jul 4, 2011 -
Re: Torn and Ragged
Wow, a really nice poem. Pretty epic and I love the message behind it, war Is always a timeless theme. I like the repartition of the first and second line ...
Jul 2, 2011 -
Re: Firelight
Nice, I really like this. It would make a fantastic Linocut, screen print or even a wood cut. Nice line and balance, it's slightly abstract which I like. It does ...
Jul 2, 2011 -
Re: hellooo :3
Hello and welcome to YWS! I'm Jen. If you ever need a review please drop me a line. I like to review art. Make sure you review too!
Jun 30, 2011
