Jennya

Hello, I see from your small amount of reviews that you are probably a newbie (forgive me if I'm wrong) so welcome to YWS. I general this is a really ...

Hello, thanks for the review, will take your advice advice to hand. I will try to review differently this time, just experimenting. First/ Second Paragraph. I think the first couple ...

This is very interesting, I too have trouble with this but then again I don't really want characters to completely loved. I think the other people are right, sympathy does ...

I would disagree, since its sometimes hard to review certain works. Sometimes works are just so good all I can do is click like, although I am guilty of avoiding ...

I hate it when work doesn't get marked or even worse when it get marked and you get no feedback.Since this is in old English it will be hard to ...

Hello here to review your work. I will review as I read, I find it easily that way. I will put my comments into your novel. But first thing is ...

Nice poem, Ive never seen one written on this topic so you defiantly get kudos for originality. Not only have you written about a original topic but done it quite ...

Hello, The other reviews are so long its crazy, I bow down to their awesomeness. A dark figure ghosted across the roof of one building and leapt for the next ...

Hey, Pretty awesome fan art. Although I'm not a fan of video games, mainly because Ive never had the chance to play any I have heard of Assassins Creed. I ...

This is something I did quickly in class. The poem is meant to be disjointed as we had to relpicate the style of an other Poet, Judith Beveridge. This poem ...

Hello, This is a nice way to start a story. Quite a nice intro goes well with the prologue. Although this is a little to short for an actual chapter ...

Hey, long time since I have reviewed anything of yours been rather busy with school work. I must say you have improved and you where awesome before hand. My internet ...

Hello! I have come to review! Personally, just by looking at this I can see that it might fit better in the poetry section. This is defiantly not a short ...

Hey Pyro, Welcome to the wonderful universe that is YWS. Don't worry you will get use to everything very quickly. All you have to do is read and review so ...

Hey, I have come to review. I have read parts of the other reviews and they are very good. I used to love prologues but now I like the reader ...