Jennya

Wow, on computer? that's pretty amazing. Great work, i really have nothing to say.

Not bad, the face was quite good but the body was out of proportion. I suggest looking and study real people so you can get the proportion right. Everything else ...

Nice, not bad at all. I'm no expert on Anime but i can see that you have talent. But the everything seems a little flat not enough tone or definition ...

Nice, i quite like it reminds me of when i was younger. It seems a little random though, maybe a little disconnected. It's one of those poems you must read ...

I come from a lower class background. My parents are both migrants. I live with my mother and life is quite hard for us, even though my dad does pay ...

I quite like it. It does indeed have a very biblical feel but try to make the characters complex. Stories all ways get boring and annoying if everything is to ...

Loved it, very cute and very quirky. Quite original as well. The end was great. Keep up the good work.

Hi, My name is Jenny and i am of course quite new to this site. Apart from writing and reading i like food, music ( alternative preferred but anything goes) ...

I quite liked it. Very intriguing. You know that something bad is going to happen and i love the suspense. Since its a prologue i think it would be sin ...

The most beautiful thing i have read for a long time. I seemed to captivate and drag me in. The poem was long and i usually don't like long poems ...

My mother stands there washing the dishes under running water staring into a dirty concrete wall, she stalls wondering what happened to her life but her eyes are blank My ...

I also didn't really understand it completely but it made me laugh. I think its cute and quirky. Not sure if this helped.

This is my first review so forgive me if it's not the best. I really loved your poem. I have to agree with the others, although it was long it ...

Hey, I'm jenny and i am, obviously, new to this. I apart from writing i like ice cream, alternative music and thinking about buying things i cannot afford. :o