Jennya

I'm not an expert on essays but i will try to say something useful. 1. Make your paragraphs and structure clearer. I'm sure this is not your fault just because ...

Very beautiful, I will read the others. There is nothing bad i can say about this poem you have set the mood perfectly and also tell the story perfectly. Keep ...

I love it. I love your style and i love this piece! The only problem i have is that it needs a little more definition maybe some darker lines. Also ...

Hey, i quite liked this. It was true to the original, I like how Romeo dies before Juliet awakes. I like your style but it's a bit plain to me ...

Amazing , i love your character the voice is very refreshing and original! I will subscribe and keep read all your other chapters. Keep up the good work!

This is no longer part of my novel, just an old draft![ /center] [center]Valkyrie Chapter 1 : Where am I ? It was raining. A cold winter’s day. The world ...

I love your first poem and there isn't much i can say about it. Although I'm not an expert. I quite like the repetition and it's general overall feeling. I ...

I have to admit these a quite amazing. Very cute. I love you style. There is really nothing i can say except that you should try some other medium, maybe ...

I have to admit this is awesome. Great job your lines are very clean and neat. I really don't have much to say but here it goes anyway. 1. The ...

Blah, where to hide? Oh, I don't know. What would Wolfie do? Well he would probably open up some portal and slip into the one of the other-worlds. I can't ...

This sounds fun, i will give it a shot! :o

Hey, I also drew my own avatar! I loved the first pic, it was cute and adorable. though i would try using more colors maybe different types of blue. The ...

Hey, In general you pictures where not bad, I quite liked them. 1. The hair was probably the biggest problem, not enough detail really was just random lines. The faces ...

Hey, In general you pictures where not bad, i quite liked them. 1. The hair was probably the biggest problem, not enough detail really was just random lines. The faces ...

Hey, Welcome to YWS, hopefully you will find this site very useful because I sure have. Your story sounds great, quite a nice title. I'm writing a story called Valkyrie ...