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Re: Sorry to Mubarak, Due to My Lack of Manner
I am not Egyptian but I have been following the story on the news. It's good that your getting your feeling out. :) Personally i don't believe that he is ...
Feb 16, 2011 -
Re: Jerabeth chapter 2: an elf named Sarah
farther into her sheets knowing the answer. Maybe try further. Anyway, I love your style very whimsical and innocent. But for some reason this doesn't settle well with me mainly ...
Feb 16, 2011 -
Re: Prince in all but name; Experimental chapter 1
Chapter 1 Corvin jumped high into the air. A large black rife slung across his on his shoulders, a sword at his hip, a gun in each hand shooting out ...
Feb 15, 2011 -
Re: Why Hide the Eye
WOW, certainly the best thing I've seen from you so far. I love how you have just forgotten everything else. It really concentrates the eye to the figure. My only ...
Feb 15, 2011 -
Re: Auto portrait.
Nice, certainly better than anything I could do, I'm terrible with anything other than pencil . Personally i don't have any issues with it but i will try to squeeze ...
Feb 15, 2011 -
Re: Tramping
Nice. You tell the story quite well. Personally I think your punctuation is fine but then again I'm no expert. My shoes sink in mud in the mud? Maybe that ...
Feb 15, 2011 -
Re: Bolshevik Beat
Nice and fun to read. It made me laugh. You have nicely achieved a good beat and rhythm. Personally I don't find your poem hard to understand but I do ...
Feb 14, 2011 -
Re: The King's Speech (2010) Review
Nice review :D Will defiantly try to see this movie.
Feb 13, 2011 -
Re: Slips of the Pen
Wonderful poem. i only just understand your poem but I have the feeling that is the effect you wanted to give . I love how the poem seems to drag ...
Feb 13, 2011 -
Re: Temper - A superhero
Nice, my internet is capped so I can't see your pictures to well. 1. Flat lines. Everything seems to be only one tone. I suggest not using lined paper it ...
Feb 12, 2011 -
Re: Out From The Ashes...
Wow, pretty neat. The wings look amazing. so does the hair. Most of the picture is read but you still manage to make everything pop. 1. Stars a bit boring ...
Feb 11, 2011 -
Re: Angel in the Skies- Kate
Nice, first of all the positives. I have to admit the hair is quite amazing and so are the eyes. Seem innocent and unfathomable at the same time, you wonder ...
Feb 11, 2011 -
Re: The Unavailing
I love this. It gets you right into the mood straight away and pulls you right into the story. I also love the perspective, it rakes real skill to pull ...
Feb 10, 2011 -
Re: A Futurama Fan-Art (Fry+Leela)
I to love Futurama. Your picture seems pretty accurate nit perfect but from memory they are pretty good. But your lines are messy and not clean cut as the should ...
Feb 10, 2011 -
Re: Everyone Matters
Firstly i love you style and you obviously have talent. In general you pieced where very good and It is had to point out things that you could possibly improve ...
Feb 8, 2011
