Jennya

If you need me to review your art just pop in a link! I know a fair bit about, drawings, paintings etc. but nothing about photography.

Nice, I like the title of this the most. Carrots= genius and very cute. I will outline the issues I have with this quickly. 1. Twilight quote= not good. It ...

This was beautiful. I suggest splitting the last stanza into two so it would be more uniform. I love your language and the metaphors. The change in tone was also ...

I laughed when I read all of theses stories. The one about the gifts was my favorite.I love how you joined seemingly random objects and things and managed to tie ...

Nice, I'm a bit tired right now so i won't go into detail. 1. is the proportion, her thighs are to long, the knees should be under the dress not ...

eni meeni miney mo ... Lumi :D

Ranger Hawk I here by give you 7/ 10. Gaga is always good and so is flyleaf. 1. F.T.W.W.W- My Chemical Romance, a song about android hookers and F... the ...

Nice, it's a bit long though making it a little hard to read. Try creating stanzas and neatening everything up. The start is very nice but it get's messy after ...

I'm trying to figure out what this is about but the answer alludes me, maybe because I am tired. I quite like this poem, I like that shape and the ...

Profanity Profanity! She screamed I laughed, it was profanity amazing how she Had managed to Cut the meat for the profanity Barbie and a scull a profanity stubby And the ...

Great! it's good to see you branching out! this is what being a good artist is about ( according to my school teacher). The style is almost Alice and wonderland ...

Hey, nice pic personally I'm one for hard constitutive criticism so i am going to try and squeeze as much out a possible. But in general this is quite the ...

I loved this. It was quite hard to wrap my head around though. Maybe try stanza's to make reading easier. Since i've never come across anything like this before it's ...

Hey, I'm not American so personally I wasn't really offended by this poem. This is a poem not an essay no back up is needed, poems are here to express ...

Nice, not bad but i do have some but very few issues. 1. It looks over processed . Yes, i know I'm being nit picky but I don't partially like ...