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Jennya

  • Art & Photography Re: The difference of wings

    Pretty darn awesome. It's almost flawless. A lot better then what i could have done, and in not half bad. It's good to see someone studying the body to improve ...

    Feb 21, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Good Dog

    Very beautiful, quite haunting. The emotion, cold emotion seems to run form like water down a stream. This is a great piece of work. I loved the first stanza it ...

    Feb 21, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: White Coats

    I love this poem. I like the issues it is addressing and the way you have addressed it. The constant rhetorical questions are good you have not over done them ...

    Feb 21, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Storm Clouds

    Nice, pretty neat. In someway it's almost a a narrative poem , rather epic. I the story, picture and mood you painted where wonderful. This is a piece to make ...

    Feb 21, 2011
  • Art & Photography Re: Not Sure, Help Me?-FIXED

    Hey, this is pretty neat. I myself have only ever drawn a baby once and it was pretty hard but it's good to see someone pulling it off. I'm a ...

    Feb 20, 2011
  • Art & Photography Re: Blue Face

    Blah, Amazing. This made me smile when i saw it. It's beautiful. I love the expression. I love the use of purple of the lines. Great work! i have nothing ...

    Feb 20, 2011
  • Art & Photography Re: The Pacific

    Hey, overall quite nice. I agree with the others charcoal would be a better medium. You should get some it's quite cheap compared with other artists material like gouache which ...

    Feb 20, 2011
  • Other Poetry Re: Piano Boy

    I agree with the person above me, breaking he overall pattern; the number of lines, the rhyming, the structure and he repetition was not partially a good thing to do. ...

    Feb 20, 2011
  • Art & Photography Re: The Silent Song (My graphic novel) <<Updated>>

    Nice. My internet is capped so only some of your pictures. it is actually showing up. In general, it's quite good. The dialog isn't bad and so is the art. ...

    Feb 20, 2011
  • Fantasy Novels Re: Resident hate

    I like it. I really don't have much to say except you use ... to much.

    Feb 20, 2011
  • Fantasy Short Stories Re: Short battle scene

    I'm no expert on battle scenes but i get the feeling that this is to long to descriptive. When i write a battle scene ( very rare) i like them ...

    Feb 20, 2011
  • Serious Discussion and Debate Re: 'Tiger Mom' Claims that Chinese Parenting is Superior

    1. No, it is not morally right but then again she is the parent. My mother is a less extreme version of this and it wasn't good for me. I ...

    Feb 19, 2011
  • Art & Photography Re: Sketch of a Forgotten Marionette

    Nice, I will review your art quickly! 1. Overall a nice feeling. It's quite dark which i like, the shading is good to. 2. The proportion is also a little ...

    Feb 19, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Cyberwar

    I love your style. So very different from mine. I also love the subject matter of your poems, who would know such an nice poem could be written about shutting ...

    Feb 19, 2011
  • WRFF Archive Re: Ranger's Reviews

    I've seen your reviews they are very good! :D

    Feb 19, 2011


If I seem to wander, if I seem to stray, remember that true stories seldom take the straightest way.
— Patrick Rothfuss, The Name of the Wind