Jennya

I loved this. Strangely haunting for something about something ( what was this about ?) bought in Wal-mart. A nice poem about consumerism. I like how it's quite ambiguous and ...

Perry Quarter, worked in a fast food store. It wasn't pretty, going to school everyday smelling like week old grease and animal fat but he did what he had to ...

Hey, not bad. It really set's up the scene generally agree with the people above me. Raoden is basically correct about everything he says. A prologue is not needed at ...

Hey, quite nice overall. I like how you get the the point, i really admire this since I'm a waffler. Also your characters seem very interesting, nice and well balanced. ...

The first thing i noticed about this poem was the way it was set out. It could be great if you changed this to make it easier to read. I ...

I love this. Personally i think its quite a good poem but then again I'm no expert. I like the rhyming patterns and the language is fluid. The repartition is ...

Good work, considering hands are so hard to draw! Overall you have done a good job. Personally i suck at drawing hands, an i highly doubt i could have done ...

I quite liked this. Quite different from the stud i usually read and rather intriguing. I want to read more already. It would be nice if you could post the ...

Yes, 5 meters per second is very fast for a trolley, not that i think about it. But then again in physics class me have to simplify things to make ...

School time dreaming of places I have never been As the trolley hits the make shift wall at a velocity of 5m per second Of places I have seen, in ...

Hey, overall a nice poem. But I have to admit it was only nice, if not a little cliche. There was nothing really stand out about this, there is only ...

Hey, this is quite nice. It's a great backdrop for your story and creates intrigue. I hope theses picture's where yours because then their might be copyright issues. Anyway... Overall ...

Amazing, lovely satire dips of the computer screen. I love how you did this. It seems to perfectly serious and even has a ' a little girl wrote this' tone. ...

I have never reviewed anything lyrical before, simply because I know nothing about lyric writing. So i will treat this like a poem. I quite like the reparation. As a ...

Insest??? Or owl city??? pushing that aside. This wasn't to bad. But I felt like a young girl was writing it not a older boy. In general the piece was ...