Jennya

Nice, this is a poem most people can relate to. I like your voice and your use of language, the voice you present us is quite unique, I can't really ...

Nice, you obviously have real talent. But it isn't great to spend so much time coping others art. You should use his influence to make your own inspired works. I ...

Nice, cute to and you have good taste in music. Not to bad but I would work on the perspective, maybe a little more detail on the couch and the ...

Amazing, Your very talented you remind me of a girl in my school who's a professional songwriter. This is just an opinion, don't over use your high notes you lower ...

Neat, it's good to see you churn out that art! I will review each quickly and individually! 1. All right, but not the best. The faces are a little flat ...

Nice, there is really nothing wrong with this and after all you are an animation student an I'm just a pesky high school kid. I'm sure their are many different ...

I quite like your poetry and understood this to an extent, as I'm a physics student of sorts. This randomness is your style and you should keep it this way. ...

This is an experimental chapter, to me it's a little too stereotypical. Personally I like ambiguity but I'll give you some back ground. Mordred, is a department store heir, rich ...

Nice, you portrayed music is very well. I quite love your last sentence, i absolutely agree with it. Makes me wonder why I haven't written a poem about music yet. ...

Hey, nice and very emotional poem. I like the colloquial direct to your face tone, it gives it a nice personal feel. Almost hard boiled in a good way. My ...

Nice, in general a pretty good job. You have captured the expressions quite well. 1. First thing is proportion. In general it's alright but it's still something that everybody has ...

Nice, again i like your characters but i do have a few issues. In the first paragraph your used beautiful twice close together maybe use another word. Also i have ...

Leah Goldsmith didn't remember her name. She didn't even remember her age, her family and sometimes even her gender. All she ever saw all she ever remembered was that terrible ...

Sometimes, inspiration evades me, Hiding like a shadow in the night, Descending into that deep dark hole, my mind. Sometimes, I can hear it scream Calling my thoughts, up in ...

Pretty darn amazing. Really have nothing else to say.