Jennya

Name: Thomas (Tom) O'Connor Age: Looks 21 probably older Gender: Male Persona: Illegal surgeon, will fix any wound for a sum. Falls back on trust old prostitution when times get ...

Nice, i like this.I can really relate to it. It flows nicely and I love the direct speech, it really sings to the audience. The repetition is also good. This ...

Nice, i will review each one by one! I feel a little lazy so they might not be to great. 1. Love the coloring and the general expression. The coloring ...

Wow nice, i know nothing about photography but theses are amazing.Great work!

Hey, it's me again. I agree with the other person, the colors are very rich and vibrant, it's quite different to the stuff you usually do. They just pop at ...

Love the twist, I was not expecting this! this was quite unexpected and this defiantly a god thing, i like how you have inc operated all the characters. But beware ...

The others have given you great comments, since I'm not to good at that kind of stuff I suggest you listen to them. You a really churning out theses chapters ...

Great poem, in general I agree with what others have said. it's very calming and easy to the eye. Great work!

Welcome to YWS, nice first poem! I like the repetition and the beat is quite good although it sounds a little off in some places. But I would suggest you ...

Nice, generally quite good, it reminds me very much of that great German crime show, Rex ( i think that's what it is called) . You really should check it ...

Nice, the dragon has real character and personality. Gives it a nice feel. I will try to critic your work. 1.Yes, head is to big but that doesn't matter, I ...

Epic chair, very cute! i have nothing else to say !

Welcome to YWS! Feel free to drop me a line if you need anything. Make sure you review other people's work as well. Also spelling and grammar are very important, ...

Lovely, very funny! the end was very cute. I assume she became vampire afterward, like the whiny cow from Twilight. Great fun to read!

This is something i did as exploration for my art folio, it isn't great but i liked it until I added the color. Anyone have any tips. I feel like ...