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Re: Black and White?
Nice, I'm a bit lazy so i will make it quick. Forgive me if I'm a bit nit picky and my spelling is probably going to be terrible. 1. Good, ...
Mar 20, 2011 -
Re: Untitled
Hey, nice work! Personally i don't think you really need art lessons to be good artist, or even a talented draftsman. Mys sister got a multitude of art lessons while ...
Mar 20, 2011 -
Re: Church
Nice, this is very much a poem. Is your church being mean to you? People can be so judgmental. Anyway this is a very good poem! keep writing ( unlike ...
Mar 18, 2011 -
Re: Books changing the world
Robinson Crusoe, was a very important book. It's author Daniel Defoe is considered one of the first English novelists, without people like him there would be no novels at all. ...
Mar 18, 2011 -
Re: Christianity ( In a Nut Shell)
Hey, it's brave of you to do something controversial. In general it was quite nice but i felt that the lines where to long, and because of that the rhyming ...
Mar 18, 2011 -
Re: Clean
I like that line, full of emotion, can't really place it any other way.
Mar 17, 2011 -
Re: Dragon digital painting
Nice, I know nothing about digital media so my review will be more about composition. You should also take everything i say with a grain of salt, I'm no expert. ...
Mar 17, 2011 -
Re: Rapunzel
Nice, although i know absolutely nothing about photo shop i will review this anyway. In general it's really very good, although shes doesn't look that much like the girl from ...
Mar 17, 2011 -
Re: Innocence of a Demon: Chapter One Blood
Hey, Nice, a little long but good never the less. I like the intro, very nice. Personally, i don't like daemon angel books. They are to ' teen fiction' like, ...
Mar 17, 2011 -
Re: The Basement
What the hell was going on... stupid girl just ran away after kissing him. Girls where so complicated. Sometimes he wished he was gay. Firstly if would piss his homophobic ...
Mar 16, 2011 -
Re: Clean
This review will be lousy. Nice, a great free form poem. Easy to read and full of messages, this is my type of poetry. The whole thing is like one ...
Mar 15, 2011 -
Re: The Basement
Tom Something touched him, something soft and delicate. He kept his eyes closed, confused. Rose? Lips like soft clouds of heaven against his face. Rose, your fifteen you shouldn't be ...
Mar 15, 2011 -
Re: Rapunzel atop Babel
Wow, this is not just poetry it's art. Wow, again... ( lousy review)
Mar 14, 2011 -
Re: It begins with a pencil and white paper.
Nice, reminds me of something i did a long time ago, but your work is a lot better. Your stuff is pretty dam good so i don;t really have much ...
Mar 14, 2011 -
Re: nonsense
You should really make this into a poem. I quite like the use of your short and sharp sentences. Very fast paced, although more paragraphs would be nice. It's good ...
Mar 14, 2011
