Jennya

This is more a self reflective poem than a religious one. For those who are having trouble finding finding the plot line, Its a about the moment I stopped believe ...

Hello, I'm here to review. People might look at this poem and denounce it because it against what they believe in. I don't agree with the other reviewers, just because ...

Hello, I have come to review but I have a feeling this one won't be too long, I have a feeling is poem will be quite good. Now the opening ...

Hello, I have come to review. Prologue: Now I like the start, I get a real feel for the character and the story within the first couple of sentences, I ...

This sounds a lot like a series i read called the Dresden Files and an other story of mine which features a half fairy doctor, who also solves mysteries part ...

Hello, Its been a while since I prowled the art section but here I go. In general this is quite good. You have shown a great level of skill and ...

I would buy it but no one In my family has the means of buying it. No credit cards or visas. :(

Lovely poem. A great piece of narrative poetry. I loved the idea of concept and the placement of dialogue in italics within your poem, really gave it an original touch. ...

I desperately need help with the dialogue and its structure. There will be grammar issues. The spacing is a little strange on YWS, please try to ignore it. He heard ...

Hello, I have come to review. Now the first thing I noticed was the strange structure. You seem to jump from short one word lines to a whole big paragraph. ...

No longer participating, sorry There are so many male characters I might as well make a female one. Name: River or Rain ( depending on what sort of personality she ...

Hello, I can't literally hear you :smt002 but I'm getting you loud and clear. But never the less a nice little intro, I don't know if your talking about yourself ...

We can see that old man by the river. His herd drinking from tepid waters. His hands worn down from eons of toil under a hot bleeding sun. As he ...

I'm planing to read your other chapters so I might as well give the first one a review. Okay first sentences are important. Your first sentence is quite good. I ...

I need a little help with this. It's unfinished but it for school and I need the grades. This is a very rough draft, please give critic. Thanks! Meredith frowns, ...