Jennya

I like them but I'm not addicted. The user below me loves kitty cats :mrgreen:

Hello its review day and I have come to review. I'll review and give comments as I read. Now firstly your novel needs a name :) I quite like the ...

Do essays count?

She opened her eyes. Her pupils dilating, like black ink upon dirty grey paper. It was dim. She could see the heat shadows, from the fires, smell the smoke running ...

Okay this is very long. Will take me a while to get though. I get what you mean by the re writing though. Now the first thing I notice is ...

I really love this. Short stories have to be character driven and this has pretty good characters. This is pretty relate-able and I love the small twist at the end. ...

I have an issue with writing hundreds of first chapters for this novel, this is my latest attempt. A little flowery but I think its okay. It was dark, the ...

It sounds cool, you must work hard to keep it away from stereotypes. Try and make her a relate-able character but the idea sounds good quite interesting actually!

This is a little to ranty for my liking, rant poetry although good in the moment should be looked at and refined. I agree with the first reviewer, line beaks ...

Prologue I've tried and tried this project hundreds and hundreds of times. I usually start of all dark flowery and mysterious, so I wanted to do something different. He woke ...

Dam, I wished I had entered this.

Cool. This is pretty awesome. Really nice mood and feeling you have created. The narrator has a sort of dramatic flair that I like, a real nice sense of personality ...

Sorry But I don't think I have the time to do this and my character is a little to much like someone else's. Sorry

Nice, I've never written a haiku myself but you have seemed to follow the pattern and the themes of that a good haiku should have. I agree with the previous ...

Nice, when I think of in direct speech I think of ancient Roman histories. Its a really great way to get something across and characterize characters ( wow that sounds ...