Jennafina

That was interesting, but I would have liked it better if you described the moment in which Joey changes his mind from wanting to kill Mr. Finch to trying to ...

Please format your work. It's so hard to read when it's all bunched up. I lost my place about twenty times. Add a lot more paragraphs and I gaurentee that ...

This is for Shafter. :) I'm not sure. It sounds interesting and I'm sure it's relevent, but it also sounds like just another fantasy novel with an inpronouncable name. I ...

It sounds like a romance. Maybe historical fiction? It doesn't really grab my attention, because it's in the familiar format of Betty and Bill, Harold and Maud, Jack and Jill, ...

I like your shading a lot. I'm unsure about a lot of things though. There's a line that looks like stitches on the front of his chest. Is that supposed ...

It sounds like sci-fi. I would guess there is a disaster, and the following eight and a half minutes are critical to the character's survival. Sounds fast paced. In The ...

The lights remain off. I fumble around on the dashboard, pressing random buttons. It is comforting, though I am afraid I might accidentally press the "HONEST, BUT VERY HARSH CRITIQUE ...

It sounds like it's about either a really unusual bra, or teeny pixies, small enough to drink dew from a flower. I'd read the back if I were in a ...

Areida grabbed me by the wrist and pulled me along the cooridoor. Suddanly, the hallway opened up into a cavernous room, where hundreds of people busily pressed buttons on a ...

It sounds like it's about angels. I like the word gossamer, but I've never heard it without the word gown after it. Maybe a little boring, though. Like Frosting On ...

I'm not sure if this will work, but maybe? :D One person posts a title of theirs, then the next person says what they think it's about, or something about ...

Non-fiction forum is for things like essays or biographies. I think this should go in Debate Forum (you'd have to join the usergroup first), or The Lounge. Unless it's for ...

Are you going to color it in? I think if you do, her hair should be dark red. The cloth around her hips looks a little plastic-y, like it's armor ...

8/10. Hehe. It gets funnier the more times you notice those errors. I've seen it before, though. (I think Crysi had it on TSR?)

Awwwwww. Look at this one. It's my kitty's sister. Heh, her name is Saffron Spice. What a weird name. *is random*