Jennafina

My book arrived today. I opened it and almost immediately I was crying; tears running down my face. They were tears of love, of gratitude, and of joy. I was ...

I love the words you used. Some that stood out to me especially were crooked, boisterous, prance, and treacherous. All of these are very specific: they give the reader a ...

The first think I noticed are the bright, vibrant colors. They're great; it's very eye catching how you used contrasting colors in your artwork-- it draws the viewers attention right ...

I'd like Becky to be involved. Should I post a profile?

That is way cute! I love the way you've colored it in. The purple eye was a creative touch. Also, the bone structure of the lion cub is very realistic. ...

Very nice! I like your signature as well. :) Are you going to make a second draft of this? If so, I have some ideas. It would be easier to ...

Young, smart, with a clever look in her eyes.

I like the motion, and the character interests me. The thing in the back looks like a metal monster! Mine is basically saying that to be fashionable, people starve themselves. ...

7/10. Nice! It looks like it's supposed to be a button, though.

7/10 That's really cute. I like how it's in black and white, too.

Wow! You use a lot of really cool words! Your title drew me in. I was instantly hooked, starting at line one. If you were to punctuate this, especially at ...

Interesting. :) It looks like you have a lot of passion-- that's great for writing! I have a couple suggestions that might help with this, or in your future works. ...

Haha, guys? Anything? :)

What fool Icarus for trying to be a man while clinging tight to his boyish bravado. Unworthy of his wings he’s too far gone, too high on pride and delight. ...

* If I were to eliminate any one species on this earth, it would be the dog. If, only given the option to remove one breed I was forced to ...