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Re: Anxious vs. Eager
Anxious is negative. Eager is positive. If you're looking forward to seeing someone, you're eager for their visit. If their visit is a cause of stress and you're waiting to ...
Jan 13, 2007 -
Re: It's... Daniel!
You know, I imagined Daniel as less squiggly. :roll: :lol: Haha, I'm joking. That's so pretty! And bright colors! Shiney.
Jan 13, 2007 -
Re: What made you happy today?
Its crazily gusty. A little more than a year ago I couldn't write it's! :D And, it's a long weekend. Ari- That's so awesome! :)
Jan 13, 2007 -
Re: A Collector's Art. (Revised)
I like this a lot! The fantasy element at the end came on too suddenly. I think it might be better if you introduce the possibility of magic earlier, rather ...
Jan 13, 2007 -
Re: Gorgeous
"Why are we dancing?" I asked. "Who is dancing?" "Crysi or whatever her name is, isn't she?" "Um... I'm right here..." said Crysi, from behind me. "But I thought you ...
Jan 12, 2007 -
Re: yes, another one of those long about me things.
Jennafina isn't my real name, though it's got the letters. :D I like your signature. What's your avatar?
Jan 12, 2007 -
Re: Painting: Acrylic
I think abstract art looks best if the colors actually go together. When all of these blend, it just looks like a mess. Some of that might be because the ...
Jan 11, 2007 -
Re: what
The problem with this style is that it sounds like your character is drunk from the start. The sentences are long and lack punctuation. It might be cool if you ...
Jan 11, 2007 -
Re: How Do You Pronounce "Idea"
Hey Sponson- what do you call a deer with no eyes? No ideer! Haha. That's one use for invisible R's. I like your sketches. My favorite is the MOG elephant. ...
Jan 10, 2007 -
Re: 6 Word Stories
I hadn't meant to kill him. You'll love me. Just you wait.
Jan 9, 2007 -
Re: yes, another one of those long about me things.
Welcome to YWS! I'm quite short as well, and I also have a boring name that I didn't pick. (In compensation, I go by Jennafina, XD.) And, I too ate ...
Jan 8, 2007 -
Re: Accused of First-Degree Murder
Hello! My dad is a lawer and knows about this stuff, so I asked him your questions, and here's what I got. If at first he is only considered a ...
Jan 8, 2007 -
Re: What does it mean?
Says my translator, "the verity is always the idea of everyone."
Jan 7, 2007 -
Re: Triplets, Kinda...
You're really good on paint, if that's what you used. :) Anna- She looks like the little mermaid. Vanessa- The grey hair makes her look ancient, but her face is ...
Jan 7, 2007 -
Re: My Best Friend Died Last Night
If the narrator T-boned his friend's truck, wouldn't the police have an easy lead? They'd just have to look for a vehicle with its front smashed in. Perhaps the narrator ...
Jan 6, 2007
